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Languidly
Is it wrong
that I feel
lazy?
Want you
to work today?
Actually...
That's not quite
accurate
How 'bout
we both lay
languidly
today?
I'm on my side
You're right beside me
Snuggled close are we
Just let me put my leg over yours
Now slide deep inside
I'm oh-so-wet
Just for you
Still languorous is the air
Locked together in this embrace
We gently rock together
My pussy's wide awake
Seizing, grasping, clutching you
Loving this carnal grace
Your cock is also quite alert
Rigid, throbbing, thumping inside me
Cosseting this elysian space
Closer still you clasp me 'round belly unadorned by naught save your arm
Slow undulations of our bodies wedge you deeper into me
Our frenzy is contained inside us
Hearts pumping
All that nudging
Bumping
Waves of
Electricity
Cross our skin
Lightning
Through our bodies
Souls united
Intimate pulses echoing
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Re: Languidly
Anonymous
26th Aug 2014 4:21am
Nice work -
"My pussy's wide awake
Cosseting this elysian space"
- favorite lines!
"My pussy's wide awake
Cosseting this elysian space"
- favorite lines!
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re: Re: Languidly
26th Aug 2014 4:46am
Re: Languidly
26th Aug 2014 4:51am
it begins languidly, until the heavy duty grinding kicks in. cosseting, too...
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re: Re: Languidly
26th Aug 2014 5:09am
Hmmm, JohnFeddeler, luv, ;-* ~
It seems I'll have to work a bit more assiduously at maintaining that languorous tone I'm striving for here, eh?
Bodies nearly motionless, save for what's happening inside each other, together... ;-*
It seems I'll have to work a bit more assiduously at maintaining that languorous tone I'm striving for here, eh?
Bodies nearly motionless, save for what's happening inside each other, together... ;-*
Re: Languidly
26th Aug 2014 6:25am
in your horniness, will both make things exciting in bed and you can last in bed completely forget your duty sometimes. Hot and very intense Savaja!
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re: Re: Languidly
26th Aug 2014 7:20am
Thank you, romanticguy, luv :-*!
Hmmm...
I don't think bed should ever be associated with duty... If duty's involved, something's gone horribly awry, luv. ;-*
Hmmm...
I don't think bed should ever be associated with duty... If duty's involved, something's gone horribly awry, luv. ;-*
Re: Languidly
26th Aug 2014 6:54am
Sweet coitus crescendo to an elysian echo..
sensuously written and read Savaja.
sensuously written and read Savaja.
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26th Aug 2014 7:23am
Re: Languidly
26th Aug 2014 11:40am
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26th Aug 2014 1:32pm
Yes, Granite, luv :-* ~
You got it; this one's all about the closeness... ;-*
Desire too, of course, but oh-so-close.
Thank you, luv. :-*
You got it; this one's all about the closeness... ;-*
Desire too, of course, but oh-so-close.
Thank you, luv. :-*
Re: Languidly
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26th Aug 2014 4:59pm
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re: Re: Languidly
27th Aug 2014 3:42am
Jack Tex, luv :-* ~
Educe what you'd like... ;-*
I'll keep in mind the 10-year thing, luv... :-*
Though you'll have to forgive me, who is E.L. James, anyway?
Educe what you'd like... ;-*
I'll keep in mind the 10-year thing, luv... :-*
Though you'll have to forgive me, who is E.L. James, anyway?
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27th Aug 2014 12:58pm
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Re: Languidly
26th Aug 2014 6:33pm
Cosseting this elysian space ... Incredible line - I absolutely love "elysian" and the way you've woven in the uncommon with the familiar
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re: Re: Languidly
27th Aug 2014 3:47am
Thank you, LobodeSanPedro, luv! :-*
I DO so love that line as well; I am glad it found such great favor in your eyes! :-*
The uncommon and the familiar woven together: I like that phrasing a great deal, luv. :-*
I DO so love that line as well; I am glad it found such great favor in your eyes! :-*
The uncommon and the familiar woven together: I like that phrasing a great deal, luv. :-*
Re: Languidly
26th Aug 2014 11:15pm
re: Re: Languidly
27th Aug 2014 3:49am
Thank you, xmar82, luv! :-*
There is definitely something to be said for the slow, sensual, delicious pace. ;-*
I AM glad you enjoyed, luv. :-*
There is definitely something to be said for the slow, sensual, delicious pace. ;-*
I AM glad you enjoyed, luv. :-*
Re: Languidly
27th Aug 2014 2:39am
"Souls united"...
The emotional symphony, extraordinaire.
Spirits intertwined ....
Few things compare.
Excellent write, Savaja.
The emotional symphony, extraordinaire.
Spirits intertwined ....
Few things compare.
Excellent write, Savaja.
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re: Re: Languidly
27th Aug 2014 3:53am
Thank you very much, VegasPoet, luv! :-*
Emotional accord and communion is an incredible, exquisite, exceptional thing... ;-*
Spiritual effervescence.
Emotional accord and communion is an incredible, exquisite, exceptional thing... ;-*
Spiritual effervescence.
Re: Languidly
27th Aug 2014 6:35am
Savaja this is so overwhelmingly sexy! And your reading just sends me in a spin.The way you enunciate and accentuate this super-sensuous text wakes up my every nerve and fills my mind with cocoa/fuchsia images.
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re: Re: Languidly
27th Aug 2014 12:40pm
Thank you so very much, Gahddess_Worship, luv! :-*
You do me such an intensely arousing, highly erotic, and immense honor, luv, recalling those images of me from my wanton goddess... ;-*
You do me such an intensely arousing, highly erotic, and immense honor, luv, recalling those images of me from my wanton goddess... ;-*