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Check mate
Using me as a pawn in a chid's play game
Isn't what I thought would happen to me on this lovely Tuesday
Even if I wasn't your main focus I was still discussed
You used me without even talking to me
But you had much to say about gg
What's wrong with people today
I can't even post on a site without
Getting talked about as if I'm known
No one knows me, sometimes I don't even know myself
If It was your intentions to harm this man
Leave me the hell out of it I don't take well to
Females with no back bones
They can't ever say how they feel
Move to another pawn
me I'm the queen in the chess match
You well never say check mate..
On me
Isn't what I thought would happen to me on this lovely Tuesday
Even if I wasn't your main focus I was still discussed
You used me without even talking to me
But you had much to say about gg
What's wrong with people today
I can't even post on a site without
Getting talked about as if I'm known
No one knows me, sometimes I don't even know myself
If It was your intentions to harm this man
Leave me the hell out of it I don't take well to
Females with no back bones
They can't ever say how they feel
Move to another pawn
me I'm the queen in the chess match
You well never say check mate..
On me
Published 5th Apr 2011
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5th Apr 2011 11:21pm
It's sad GG..this poem touched my heart..Love the empowerment..I'm the queen in the chess match..You will never say check mate on me..Keep posting you truly are a fire of insight..peace Crim :)
5th Apr 2011 11:22pm
5th Apr 2011 11:23pm
I enjoy this extended metaphor. I especially like the last four lines; full of command and sarcasm.
5th Apr 2011 11:25pm
5th Apr 2011 11:31pm
I had to add this to my reading list..because it really touched my heart..peace Crim
6th Apr 2011 2:19am
6th Apr 2011 8:14pm
I don't know if this will help but when ever people get to me that don't know me I listen to T.I's you don't know me and it always makes me feel empowered..wishing you peace today lovely lady..Crim :)
6th Apr 2011 8:22pm
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5th Apr 2011 11:35pm
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6th Apr 2011 2:20am
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6th Apr 2011 2:43am
I know all of this I get agitated quick and have no patients for stupidety if that how you spell it If I bust in the end that's the person on the other enda fault not mine thanks for your input
7th Apr 2011 1:51am
"Move to another pawn
me I'm the queen in the chess match
You well never say check mate..
On me"
This whole poem is centered around this theme and these are powerful words. Like one viewer said (paraphrasing) This is empowering.
me I'm the queen in the chess match
You well never say check mate..
On me"
This whole poem is centered around this theme and these are powerful words. Like one viewer said (paraphrasing) This is empowering.
7th May 2011 00:15am
sinse you want honest feedback. you spelled child wrong in the first line.
7th May 2011 1:17am
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11th May 2011 8:44pm
Like to get to know you for real if given the chance. I am not some pretender flaunting around like something I am not. I don't claim to have a label or identity...I'd rather you come up with your own conclusions about me! Gigi1978 I know what you mean...fyi we never really truly know ourselves...self knowing be damned! its better to have others fail to see what we truly are rather than come out and be a faked imitation of what others want us to be. Awesome poem!
11th May 2011 8:46pm
