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I can't write
No more word come to me
Nothing
I stare at paper all day
I want to write but I just can't
Grrrrr
It's so hard
The paper is still blank
My mind hurts
I'm thinking to much
I can't anymore
I walk away
I go an eat
I walk out side
I come back inside
To the paper that haunts me
Sitting there
Blank
Nothing
I stare at paper all day
I want to write but I just can't
Grrrrr
It's so hard
The paper is still blank
My mind hurts
I'm thinking to much
I can't anymore
I walk away
I go an eat
I walk out side
I come back inside
To the paper that haunts me
Sitting there
Blank
Published 22nd Jul 2014
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22nd Jul 2014 3:36am
22nd Jul 2014 3:39am
Oh sis its fine it happens to us all mostly to the best of us. I hope your doing fine and well sorry I haven't talked to you all summer. I hope to see you when school starts back up
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22nd Jul 2014 8:50am
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22nd Jul 2014 8:58am
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22nd Jul 2014 10:29am
Don't try to write big every time ... Look at small experiences around your everyday and write that as short pieces. From the haiku master Basho:
Now I see her face,
the old woman, abandoned,
the moon her only companion
Now I see her face,
the old woman, abandoned,
the moon her only companion
22nd Jul 2014 10:39am
For some people writing comes best when when you're not thinking about it. Try to forget you're trying to write and go one with everyday life and see if something just comes to you, you'd be surprised.
22nd Jul 2014 2:04pm
Anonymous
22nd Jul 2014 9:46pm
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23rd Jul 2014 11:17am
Anonymous
23rd Jul 2014 3:33pm
Writer Block. I hate it so when I do feel that way I get up and listen to music try to right
7th Aug 2014 8:18am
21st Aug 2014 11:00pm
I feel ya also...I've been stuck for awhile now, it has to be like everyone is saying..Writers block
30th Aug 2014 6:32am
11th Nov 2014 9:24am
Nice piece, u like this, I get this, sometimes u stare and stare then all of a sudden when the time is write your hand can't keep up with what your mind is saying. Great work, I like your poetry :)
