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The Porch
An old country couple
Sitting in wooden rocking chairs
No one saying a single word
Both faces stuck in blank stares
Suddenly, the old man
Reaches between her legs
I'd get rid of the chickens
If you could lay some eggs
She is totally fuming
Getting mad as HELL
Rocking faster and faster
So fast, she almost fell
Suddenly, here he goes again
Grabs her by the tit
If you could make some milk
I would tell the cows to get
You could see the smoke rising
Straight out of her ears
How dare this old bastard
After all of these years
She had had enough
So she grabbed his dick
Well you can't get it up
Thats why your brother gets a lick
Sitting in wooden rocking chairs
No one saying a single word
Both faces stuck in blank stares
Suddenly, the old man
Reaches between her legs
I'd get rid of the chickens
If you could lay some eggs
She is totally fuming
Getting mad as HELL
Rocking faster and faster
So fast, she almost fell
Suddenly, here he goes again
Grabs her by the tit
If you could make some milk
I would tell the cows to get
You could see the smoke rising
Straight out of her ears
How dare this old bastard
After all of these years
She had had enough
So she grabbed his dick
Well you can't get it up
Thats why your brother gets a lick
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Re: The Porch
Anonymous
16th Jul 2014 3:56am
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16th Jul 2014 4:03am
Re: The Porch
16th Jul 2014 4:18am
Buhhwahhahahahah! This is a hoot!
Thanks for the hearty laughs, Ms Belle. :D
Thanks for the hearty laughs, Ms Belle. :D
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re: Re: The Porch
16th Jul 2014 4:25am
So glad to have lightened up ur night. Loosely based on a true story with my grt grandparents but no brother was involved. Lol
Re: The Porch
Anonymous
16th Jul 2014 4:27am
Belle,
LMAO!!! Those poor chickens and cows! Fun write!
tornado
LMAO!!! Those poor chickens and cows! Fun write!
tornado
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re: Re: The Porch
16th Jul 2014 4:29am
Goes to show we all can b replaced. LMAO!!! So glad u had a good ol laugh with me
Hugs
Belle
Hugs
Belle
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16th Jul 2014 4:52pm
Re: The Porch
Anonymous
16th Jul 2014 8:39am
What a great write! Enjoyed the laugh, xo :)
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16th Jul 2014 5:02pm
Re: The Porch
16th Jul 2014 9:58am
re: Re: The Porch
16th Jul 2014 5:53pm
Glad that you enjoyed it!! Happy to have brought a smile to your face. What....jaded? Me?
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16th Jul 2014 2:33pm
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16th Jul 2014 5:43pm
Ty darlin thats quite a compliment....here n the south u will always find an open door
Hugs
Belle
Hugs
Belle
Re: The Porch
16th Jul 2014 5:30pm
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16th Jul 2014 6:00pm
Ty X....hope it helped make ur lunch even better hun with a hearty laugh
Kiss
Belle
Kiss
Belle
Re: The Porch
21st Jul 2014 3:57am
So wrong, lilsouthernbelle, luv :-*. But, so decadently good in its wrongness...
For some reason, this reminds me of you: when she was good, she was very, very good, but when she was bad, she was better. ;-)
For some reason, this reminds me of you: when she was good, she was very, very good, but when she was bad, she was better. ;-)
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21st Jul 2014 6:26am
Re: The Porch
11th Aug 2014 9:40pm
Cute...cute...cute...a fun read with a nice hint at sensuality...great imagery of an old country couple enjoying to solitude of the front or back porch...great job...polease be safe and well...thanks and take care...Jimbo
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