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The devil I want within me
Oh, the devil I want within me
Mephistopheles
It's a good thing I'm not into religiosity
Too pious and faux pure for me
Give me a devil any day to spark my play
Make a sensual delight
Divinity
Harrying me deep in the night
Commanding me
Yes, you know I'm drenched for you
Honey soaking everywhere
Slick down my thighs
Across the sheets
Look there
In your hair
Get enough to eat?
I'm wrung out
By now
You'd think I'd be dry
But no oh no
Master of your craft
Drip drip drip drip
Awash we are
You delight in driving
Another cry
Not some mere sigh
Through my swollen, kiss-bruised lips
Betwixt my panting, labored breaths
I'm making unearthly noises
I begin to fully comprehend the folly of Faustus
Because I can feel your grasp on me tightening
I can't escape
(do I really aspire to any longer? Further, and here's the rub: did I ever?)
Perhaps, I needed you to acquire me
At least for a time
I'm too evanescent a creature to remain for long
Ah, I love thee well
Thou art dear unto my heart
And art
And all those other parts
You cause to quicken with unholy warmth
Lord Devil.
Mephistopheles
It's a good thing I'm not into religiosity
Too pious and faux pure for me
Give me a devil any day to spark my play
Make a sensual delight
Divinity
Harrying me deep in the night
Commanding me
Yes, you know I'm drenched for you
Honey soaking everywhere
Slick down my thighs
Across the sheets
Look there
In your hair
Get enough to eat?
I'm wrung out
By now
You'd think I'd be dry
But no oh no
Master of your craft
Drip drip drip drip
Awash we are
You delight in driving
Another cry
Not some mere sigh
Through my swollen, kiss-bruised lips
Betwixt my panting, labored breaths
I'm making unearthly noises
I begin to fully comprehend the folly of Faustus
Because I can feel your grasp on me tightening
I can't escape
(do I really aspire to any longer? Further, and here's the rub: did I ever?)
Perhaps, I needed you to acquire me
At least for a time
I'm too evanescent a creature to remain for long
Ah, I love thee well
Thou art dear unto my heart
And art
And all those other parts
You cause to quicken with unholy warmth
Lord Devil.
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Re: The devil I want within me
7th Jul 2014 1:19am
re: Re: The devil I want within me
7th Jul 2014 2:53am
Thank you, Granite luv. :-*
I do so savor the havoc. ;-)
No prisoners? Now where's the fun in that?
I do so savor the havoc. ;-)
No prisoners? Now where's the fun in that?
Re: The devil I want within me
7th Jul 2014 2:18am
re: Re: The devil I want within me
7th Jul 2014 3:15am
Ah, Fenom (DiscipleofLife), he's always in something, that's certain... ;-)
(And, don't I just rejoice in that?)
I am gratified you enjoyed. :-*
(And, don't I just rejoice in that?)
I am gratified you enjoyed. :-*
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7th Jul 2014 6:10am
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re: Re: The devil I want within me
7th Jul 2014 3:56pm
Ah, Jack!
Dearest Mephistopheles ~
Let me make myself clear:
Tis sympathy I feel for fool Faustus if you offered a modicum of the temptation to him which entraps me fast for thee...
Dearest Mephistopheles ~
Let me make myself clear:
Tis sympathy I feel for fool Faustus if you offered a modicum of the temptation to him which entraps me fast for thee...
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7th Jul 2014 4:02pm
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7th Jul 2014 4:23pm
Let me be clearer still:
Never tamed, dear Devil, never that.
I want you just as you are
Savage
Commanding
Phrenic
Never tamed, dear Devil, never that.
I want you just as you are
Savage
Commanding
Phrenic
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7th Jul 2014 4:29pm
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Re: The devil I want within me
7th Jul 2014 6:45am
while i'm always left in awe at how polished your work is, i'm repeatedly amazed at how consistently powerful your closing lines are.
from start to finish, there's never a word wasted.
unholy communion at its very best, Savaja. enjoyed.
from start to finish, there's never a word wasted.
unholy communion at its very best, Savaja. enjoyed.
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re: Re: The devil I want within me
7th Jul 2014 4:29pm
Thank you, winter (_shadoe_). This is high praise, indeed, coming from you whose work leaves me trembling in euphoric rapture. Your enjoyment gives me joy, Snowcrystal. :-*
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Re: The devil I want within me
7th Jul 2014 3:25pm
Unholy, devilishly steamy hotness in this outstanding inking
my dear! lol...such a bad girl you are lol
my dear! lol...such a bad girl you are lol
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re: Re: The devil I want within me
7th Jul 2014 4:37pm
Thank you, Poetikmind! :-*
I know, I am a baaaad, naughty girl and I probably should be spanked.
Perhaps, Mephistopheles would...
I know, I am a baaaad, naughty girl and I probably should be spanked.
Perhaps, Mephistopheles would...
Re: The devil I want within me
23rd Jul 2014 11:21pm
Through my swollen, kiss-bruised lips
Betwixt my panting, labored breaths
I'm making unearthly noises !!!! WOW!!!
Betwixt my panting, labored breaths
I'm making unearthly noises !!!! WOW!!!
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re: Re: The devil I want within me
23rd Jul 2014 11:55pm
Re. The devil I want within me
24th Aug 2015 8:54pm
Your descriptive words stand out because normally I don't link the devil with wetness/ saturation. Two songs come to mind, INXS' "Devil Inside", and Billy Joel's "Only The Good Die Young"
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