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"Her"
I offer to ...
explore her
complex mind
cherish her
intense thoughts
nurture her
adventurous spirit
enjoy her
bright smile
absorb her
deep gaze
kiss her
warm lips
massage her
tense muscles
appreciate her
soft skin
remember her
by day
ravish her
by night
lick her
melting pie
taste her
creamy texture
savor her
condensed flavor
relish her
total release
bathe her
salacious curves
hug her
when possible
spoon her
in bed
caress her
silky hair
lull her
into slumber
awake her
slowly, gently
adore her
sleepy grin
admire her
many talents
address her
every worry
treat her
with equality
congratulate her
without envy
control her
when asked
exhibit total
unselfish liberty
honor her
complete freedom
... She accepts
*November 29, 2011*
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Re: "Her"
3rd Jun 2014 7:15am
Got a fan I can borrow??.. my my my..a sensually hot sweet write.. who would not accept??? standing O.. or as you may say.. throwing money honey :) with respect..domore
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re: Re: "Her"
3rd Jun 2014 7:29am
LOL! Ms D, there must be a fan around here somewhere. No, wait, I'll just fan you with a Palm branch. :)
Many thanks for your glowing comments.
Now, please excuse me. I have money to pick up. :D
Many thanks for your glowing comments.
Now, please excuse me. I have money to pick up. :D
Re: "Her"
3rd Jun 2014 7:28am
(said with all due respect, Sir) well it's about damn time that there's commenting options over here, i'm just about ready to spontaneously combust lol
i'll have that fan when the beautiful miss domore is done with it.
i'll have that fan when the beautiful miss domore is done with it.
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re: Re: "Her"
3rd Jun 2014 7:39am
*huge laughs* Please, no combustion. I'm running right now to cut the second Palm branch! :D
Or, this pitcher of freshly blended Margaritas may cool you a few degrees. :)
Ms Katja, thank you for sharing such great remarks!
Or, this pitcher of freshly blended Margaritas may cool you a few degrees. :)
Ms Katja, thank you for sharing such great remarks!
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3rd Jun 2014 11:16am
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3rd Jun 2014 11:19pm
Re: "Her"
Anonymous
3rd Jun 2014 11:47am
Well now EV......you will need a third branch and make mine a Malibu and coke. I will be waiting in room 69. Great to see comments again......BRAT!! LOL!! Xo :)
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re: Re: "Her"
3rd Jun 2014 11:25pm
Ahh, ES. The third Palm branch is cut and your adult beverage awaits in your room of choice. :)
How disappointing to see you have reduced yourself to juvenile name calling. LOL!
Sticks and stones may break my bones but whips and chains excite me. :D
XO
How disappointing to see you have reduced yourself to juvenile name calling. LOL!
Sticks and stones may break my bones but whips and chains excite me. :D
XO
Re: "Her"
3rd Jun 2014 7:31pm
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3rd Jun 2014 11:33pm
Ms Lena, I always appreciate your kind remarks.
"HER" and 'Her' and her and .... :)
"HER" and 'Her' and her and .... :)
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3rd Jun 2014 11:35pm
Re: "Her"
4th Jun 2014 5:37am
A case of poet idolized. You have all these women falling at your knees with oceans between their legs. I christen you, with a heavy heart, alas! The Lord Byron of DUP.
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re: Re: "Her"
4th Jun 2014 3:59pm
Candycrier, thank you for offering such an undeserved title.
Byron was a tremendous writer with far greater talent and many more 'varied' interests than I.
Byron was a tremendous writer with far greater talent and many more 'varied' interests than I.
Re: "Her"
4th Jun 2014 8:30am
VP, you are the frickin man among men
Thought I knew women but not at this level ····· not yet
Thought I knew women but not at this level ····· not yet
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re: Re: "Her"
4th Jun 2014 4:03pm
Thank you, Cody. Though certain I am 'not all that' at any level, I appreciate the gesture. :)
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2nd Jul 2014 8:06am
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2nd Jul 2014 8:38am
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12th Jan 2015 10:39pm
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Thank you for sharing such kind compliments, Natalie.
Gentleman by day. Something other by night! :)
Gentleman by day. Something other by night! :)