Burning All

ahh, the anger. an emancipation of sorts ..with any luck


a surprising enough read coming from you, clinical in your word choice. some really great lines in there ..too many to start quoting. voice is consistent and near chilling and there's a grand fluidity, seamless in its flow.

all in,  missus I cannot really offer anything constructive. all I can do is tip my metaphorical cap and throw complements

Keep shinin' Miss

I wanted to put the anger to work, and now it is DU ink instead of brewing in my head.

Thank you for the cap tip, Craic, how gallant.

;)

Use this as a threat to anyone who gets in your way and they will run like hell.

Now there's an idea... Menace and glower.

Thanks, Sid!

:) love this angry side of you!!
great release of feelings, I love writing a fuck off  poem, they always feel good.
I dig it

Haha, somehow I knew you'd approve, nikki!

Thank you for loving my rants.

the fireball, the burning bridges: its's a blazing 'torch' song...

There's a form to anger that has a life of its own. I think this flame has burned before!

Thank you, Feddeler.

They can't say they weren't warned - great write and final stanza

True enough. The warning is more for me, though, else I'll end up sweeping up ashes...

Cheers, whale.

Volatile-- anger seething with a vengence...and right on the edge of an emotional explosion!!

Your first stanza is so uniquely creative, my Friend....sets the tone for the entire piece.

(Time to duck and cover!!! :0 )

Hehehe, true, Enchantress. Loving your observations - you turn up for my darker writing, though. Ink reflects like a mirror!

;)

Appreciate your words, Friend.

Whoa!! A very intense feeling is felt here
n I can surely understand how anger can birth
a dark angry ink... N must also say, it was outstanding in ifs expression too!

Anger birthing darkness... well that IS 'Poetik'. Thank you for the comment, it may spark something...

Oh my Goddess I felt this one in my every pore....
I have been there (as my mind interprets your write), and felt that towards the most vile while clenching silently
you nailed that emotion!
great work ;-)

Ah, thanks, miki, appreciate it!

:)

Help, youve become the "fire starter"
(that Prodigy song, remember)
Your flames are gonna bite me.....

Hehe Mourganna, I love that song!

Thanks for the giggle.

Such a good & creative way to write it out; I can so relate to this. Nicely controlled ink.

It was either ink or over the brink!

Thanks, Pishashee, appreciate it.

"My teeth swim in tar
because I clamp back
on what I could spew" --That is awesome.  

I always liked the word tar just never found a way to use it. Kind of like that Nirvana song where Kurt says "I've been drawn into your magnet tar-pit trap"

Good stuff though, you're a great poet.

I don't know where the tar came from, it seemed to fit.

Thank you kindly for the visit and generous words!

It's short but I really like the words

Glad this caught your eye!

Thank you, Hydrod

I love love love this. I relate to it. Really great work! :)