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Your Writings
your writings -- I love them so
they mesmerize me and I never
want to stop reading once I start
glimpses of you appear in the
images that flow from your pen
and onto the page
materializing directly into my mind's eye
reading you is such an intimate act
and through it I connect with you
and feel close to you
your writings -- they stay forever
in my heart mind and soul
just like you.......♡♡♡
they mesmerize me and I never
want to stop reading once I start
glimpses of you appear in the
images that flow from your pen
and onto the page
materializing directly into my mind's eye
reading you is such an intimate act
and through it I connect with you
and feel close to you
your writings -- they stay forever
in my heart mind and soul
just like you.......♡♡♡
Published 27th May 2014
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27th May 2014 8:30am
28th May 2014 10:30pm
Thank you for your sweet words of praise. His writings are truly inspiring and I hold them very dear in my heart..... :) ♡♡♡
27th May 2014 9:33am
28th May 2014 10:31pm
I am the one who needs to thank you for taking the time to read my little poem and for thinking it lovely... :) ♡♡♡
27th May 2014 12:47pm
28th May 2014 10:32pm
Anonymous
27th May 2014 2:42pm
Scarlet.......this is an awesome tribute. Luving and beautiful. Enjoyed very much. Xo :)
28th May 2014 10:33pm
Glad you enjoyed my poem flowergirl...
Your opinion means the world to me and I admire your poetry greatly...... Thank you for stopping by and commenting..... :) ♡♡♡
Your opinion means the world to me and I admire your poetry greatly...... Thank you for stopping by and commenting..... :) ♡♡♡
27th May 2014 3:02pm
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28th May 2014 10:38pm
Respect and praise from a fellow poet -- what more can
I ask for -- thank you very kindly for your sweet comment...!!!
I ask for -- thank you very kindly for your sweet comment...!!!
Anonymous
29th May 2014 9:02am
I know this feeling...you put it well :)
nice work
nice work
30th May 2014 8:19am
so wonderful letter, poem! very nice writting, Scarlett, and delicious feeling, I imagine.
30th May 2014 8:26am
You are right about the delicious feeling -- thank you for leaving me such a sweet comment -- ♡♡♡ :)
3rd Jun 2014 2:46am
3rd Jun 2014 3:13am
I always love it when people I have never heard from before comment on my work. Thank you very kindly! ♡♡♡ :)
4th Jun 2014 8:12pm
4th Jun 2014 10:25pm
I am glad to have gotten so much positive feedback on this piece so far, and I am very happy to hear that you too have enjoyed my little poem.... ♡♡♡:)
5th Jun 2014 2:19pm
The theme here seems to be congruency; the connection between the actual person and his written expression.
9th Jun 2014 7:11am
11th Jun 2014 3:18am
I don't know if they know, but if they did, I think it would make them happy......♡♡♡ :)
15th Jun 2014 7:09am
reading you is such an ......
intimate act
and through it I connect with you
good
though intimate act defines
the interiors of man and woman
as they weld within
conjoined
intimate act
and through it I connect with you
good
though intimate act defines
the interiors of man and woman
as they weld within
conjoined
4th Oct 2014 7:28pm
All writers desire the sort of tribute you have created here.
Although I don't know you, and, thus, this isn't for me --I am going to claim it as if it were. And thank you for it.
Jay
Although I don't know you, and, thus, this isn't for me --I am going to claim it as if it were. And thank you for it.
Jay
Hi Scarlet, A great read & well written..I hope the recipient of your praises knows ...maybe you should make sure !! They may have a response ready and waiting for you !
