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Missed
Missed the morning rise,
thought I'd get to see it,
with you;
our first night as it was;
restless,
With you,
I will miss many more.
thought I'd get to see it,
with you;
our first night as it was;
restless,
With you,
I will miss many more.
Published 11th May 2014
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11th May 2014 10:44am
11th May 2014 10:51am
It's as you saw it and happy you saw it that way xD
actually the way I saw it was
that their first 'night' was so creative and loving that they slept through the breaking dawn
she was hoping they would miss more :)
people that see different things within poetry writes is as it should be
lovely xD
Thankyou for commenting :)
actually the way I saw it was
that their first 'night' was so creative and loving that they slept through the breaking dawn
she was hoping they would miss more :)
people that see different things within poetry writes is as it should be
lovely xD
Thankyou for commenting :)
11th May 2014 11:12am
Like Pathospassion I thought there was a sad element of love gone ... But after reading your feedback I see her gleeful disappointment
11th May 2014 11:16am
Yes happily dissapointed
poetry write only
not reality
still waiting happily to miss many sun rises xD
poetry write only
not reality
still waiting happily to miss many sun rises xD
11th May 2014 11:24am
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11th May 2014 5:33pm
Not all my writes are erotic in intent Again
some are sensual and loving
how would I know if he was satisfied
it was a poetry write xD
Your comments are putting me off writing anything
remotely erotic
it's not all about sex for me on here on dup
sometimes it's nice not to be so forward in erotica
some are sensual and loving
how would I know if he was satisfied
it was a poetry write xD
Your comments are putting me off writing anything
remotely erotic
it's not all about sex for me on here on dup
sometimes it's nice not to be so forward in erotica
12th May 2014 1:03am
12th May 2014 5:09am
12th May 2014 3:40am
So much fun last night, we missed it this morning....yum.
Breakfast is whenever WE wake...lol
This was fun!
Breakfast is whenever WE wake...lol
This was fun!
12th May 2014 5:10am
