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I Don't Give A Fuck
I know I'm not well liked
couldn't give a flying fuck
being honest is who I am
that's what it's all about
my poetry sometimes
leaves a sting and welts
other times it's like
being beaten with a limp dick
I guess that's how it goes
longing to have a powerhouse punch
for those who hate me every time
it's swing and miss
pissing poetry and arrogance
I have a soft side I don't let you see
bulletproof bra, armor intact
I won't let you see the bruises
you inflict with your callous
dislike for the whore in me
I'm a cunt and I know it
that's just me
though you play coy behind your words
I see through your acting
you're a bitch just like me
step up to the plate and admit it
respect is shown
though you spit on me
as you pass by
the masochist in me licks it up
savors your flavor
tasting your taint while giving you the finger
couldn't give a flying fuck
being honest is who I am
that's what it's all about
my poetry sometimes
leaves a sting and welts
other times it's like
being beaten with a limp dick
I guess that's how it goes
longing to have a powerhouse punch
for those who hate me every time
it's swing and miss
pissing poetry and arrogance
I have a soft side I don't let you see
bulletproof bra, armor intact
I won't let you see the bruises
you inflict with your callous
dislike for the whore in me
I'm a cunt and I know it
that's just me
though you play coy behind your words
I see through your acting
you're a bitch just like me
step up to the plate and admit it
respect is shown
though you spit on me
as you pass by
the masochist in me licks it up
savors your flavor
tasting your taint while giving you the finger
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Re: I Don't Give A Fuck
6th May 2014 5:01am
ah yes, spitting fire. You set ablaze our pages with your blistering poetry:) love it, sweet Crim*
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6th May 2014 5:06am
thank you lovely Angel you set my nights ablaze with passion with your writes :) with love Crim
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Anonymous
6th May 2014 5:28am
Sweet Crim....Luv it!! Strong powerful write. Although I can't imagine anyone hating you....in saying that....we all have them. Oh yes we dooooooooo!!!!! Straight forward vent. Admire you much for it. Xo :)
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6th May 2014 5:32am
thank you lovely Flower I've never felt anything but love from you though I sense hate for who I am here too.. thank you for understanding :) with love Crim
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Anonymous
6th May 2014 5:36am
BTW.....I luv ya and many others do too. So fuck those who don't!!! Xo :)
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6th May 2014 5:32am
none of us give a fk, that's why we hack up poetry like we do. you're always good for shock value, Crim...
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6th May 2014 5:41am
I guess I do that John lol thank you.. though you finesse poetry in such an excellent way :) with love Crim
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6th May 2014 5:54am
Lovely Brenda, I stand and applaud your character, honesty being the very foundation. BRAVO!
These words bring joy, for it is pleasing to see you stand tall and shout it out. Good on ya for keeping it real.
Phuck 'em if they can't accept reality.
Love it,
Chad
These words bring joy, for it is pleasing to see you stand tall and shout it out. Good on ya for keeping it real.
Phuck 'em if they can't accept reality.
Love it,
Chad
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6th May 2014 5:07pm
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6th May 2014 6:41am
I like your 'salute!' brilliant! Don't let it stop your ink, I love reading it xx
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6th May 2014 7:27am
fuck yeah! flipping off hypocrites with class, beautiful Brenda.
"I have a soft side I don't let you see"
really struck a chord with me.
a great vent, well written and enjoyed xo
"I have a soft side I don't let you see"
really struck a chord with me.
a great vent, well written and enjoyed xo
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Anonymous
6th May 2014 1:17pm
In the first stanza, should it say "couldn't give a flying fuck" instead of "Could give a flying fuck"? I don't know I just kept stumbling over that, and I read it through a couple of times.
I love the don't-give-a-shit nature of this write. It's pure, and it's passionate. Hell, this is the kind of thing I'd love to read aloud. Especially loving the 'bulletproof bra' reference.
Great passionate little write. Thank you for the read.
I love the don't-give-a-shit nature of this write. It's pure, and it's passionate. Hell, this is the kind of thing I'd love to read aloud. Especially loving the 'bulletproof bra' reference.
Great passionate little write. Thank you for the read.
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6th May 2014 5:14pm
you're right Missy about couldn't it reads right now.. thank you graciously for such a great comment I would be thrilled if you read it.. with respect Crim
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6th May 2014 1:52pm
I think this is your apex on rage writes.
I love the straight up in your face no holds barred attack and assault commando style writing. This is stun gun writing. You've outdone yourself, what's next ?
With great respect for who you are and tellmg anyone who doesn't like it to go fuck themselves ....
Bravo
You are the Queen Bitch here and don't you forget it !!!
I love the straight up in your face no holds barred attack and assault commando style writing. This is stun gun writing. You've outdone yourself, what's next ?
With great respect for who you are and tellmg anyone who doesn't like it to go fuck themselves ....
Bravo
You are the Queen Bitch here and don't you forget it !!!
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6th May 2014 3:11pm
WOW!! you convey in such a "balls to the wall way"..things I wish I could say!!... I admire you and your strength..the way you express yourself. in this write and the many I've read of yours.. you are one of a kind!! A true talent! And those that think otherwise can sooooo go "eff" themselves!! Kudos!! with love and respect..xoxo domore
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Re: I Don't Give A Fuck
6th May 2014 4:01pm
Well if you're actually giving FUCKS please put me down for ONE a day at the very least, I'm greedy lol
Seriously, intensely n excellently expressed
Seriously, intensely n excellently expressed
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6th May 2014 5:18pm
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Anonymous
6th May 2014 7:07pm
Omg I fucking love this!!!
I wish I wrote it!!!
I wish I wrote it!!!
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Anonymous
6th May 2014 9:19pm
It was the bulletproof bra that did me in. Sigh. This would have been great (for me) back in high school; a lot of haters there. Excellent write!. . .with respect, Devlin:)
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8th May 2014 4:53pm
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POW! Kick'em where it hurts, Crim.
This is type of ink that says, 'I don't give a flying fuck about you and wouldn't spit on ya if you were on fire. :) Direct and in your face, no holds barred. Love it! Xoxo
This is type of ink that says, 'I don't give a flying fuck about you and wouldn't spit on ya if you were on fire. :) Direct and in your face, no holds barred. Love it! Xoxo
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6th May 2014 9:44pm
I am not gonna lie, that shit turned me on. The power was intoxicating
he masochist in me licks it up
savors your flavor
tasting your taint while giving you the finger < fav line....dirty, sexy, confident - I am not sure what to say...that shit was bad ass.
he masochist in me licks it up
savors your flavor
tasting your taint while giving you the finger < fav line....dirty, sexy, confident - I am not sure what to say...that shit was bad ass.
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7th May 2014 1:39am
I love your attitude and charisma Crim!
who ever hates on you just makes you stronger!!
Write on honey <3
Btw I thought this with all your writings is awesome!
Thoughtfully
Zazzles Xo
who ever hates on you just makes you stronger!!
Write on honey <3
Btw I thought this with all your writings is awesome!
Thoughtfully
Zazzles Xo
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Re: I Don't Give A Fuck
8th May 2014 5:50pm
Fuck yeah girl!!! Being honest is all we can truly do. Most hide behind their fear and ignorance with a bowed out chest. Rock on my lady!
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8th May 2014 6:02pm
thank you kindly Sir for putting a smile on my face this morning :) with love Crim
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"a limp dick " funny I know a few on this site not going to mention names yet I will soon write about it ...lol My little black book a tell all? coming soon.....stay tuned..
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Anonymous
28th May 2014 2:41pm
Damn lady..a lot of power exuding from those words, although there is a lot of brokenness there too. I can relate to it and feel it deeply.
nice work
peace n love :) Miki
nice work
peace n love :) Miki
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