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Back In The UK
Will you be my English rose
if but only for one day
wanted to feel you for so long
the intensity of our play?
Can I lure you into the darkened corner
hiking the hem up of your dress
body positioned so you can't escape
the tent in my pants that I press?
May I show why a stud of my persuasion
needs to be ridden more often then not
surely the feeling is preferred
to any toys that can be bought
And take you in the collection of hosiery
that attracts the eye of any man that is hard
at midnight under the light of the moon
nature surrounds us in the confines of the yard?
Can you be seduced, pleasured and be ever receptive
to the hunger that starts deep in erotic fires
let them grew to almost uncontrolled
and laugh at boredom's funeral pyre
if but only for one day
wanted to feel you for so long
the intensity of our play?
Can I lure you into the darkened corner
hiking the hem up of your dress
body positioned so you can't escape
the tent in my pants that I press?
May I show why a stud of my persuasion
needs to be ridden more often then not
surely the feeling is preferred
to any toys that can be bought
And take you in the collection of hosiery
that attracts the eye of any man that is hard
at midnight under the light of the moon
nature surrounds us in the confines of the yard?
Can you be seduced, pleasured and be ever receptive
to the hunger that starts deep in erotic fires
let them grew to almost uncontrolled
and laugh at boredom's funeral pyre
Published 4th May 2014
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4th May 2014 2:35pm
Gives me the impression the scene is a camping site in the English countryside.
Just one criticism. I would not use the word 'ravished' for writing of a would-be consensual act - it means raped.
Just one criticism. I would not use the word 'ravished' for writing of a would-be consensual act - it means raped.
4th May 2014 3:46pm
19th May 2014 10:58am
19th May 2014 3:57pm
Thanks---back in college I was quite taken with a lass from the UK. Never amounted to anything more then hugs; she thought of me as more like a brother.
