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My Gift
welcome to the frayed ends of darkness edge
were the candles flicker their last breath
flames consumed by submissive cries
set ablaze by my hardened hands
releasing emotions deep inside
I see you fading as you swirl away
just like the candles last breath
absorbing the infliction of my love
your fingers caressing the seams
Of the dark edge you love
collared to my carnal desires
tethered to my hidden secrets
bound to my fantasy
caged to my command
marked by my authority
My dominant gifts of wind for your wings
lifting you beyond the edge I hold tight
As I glide within your escape
kissing your blood served with my love
and licking the tears of empty fears
for they are filled with salty pleasures
And whisper "thank you for allowing me to watch as you spread your feathers"
"It was truly a gift"
were the candles flicker their last breath
flames consumed by submissive cries
set ablaze by my hardened hands
releasing emotions deep inside
I see you fading as you swirl away
just like the candles last breath
absorbing the infliction of my love
your fingers caressing the seams
Of the dark edge you love
collared to my carnal desires
tethered to my hidden secrets
bound to my fantasy
caged to my command
marked by my authority
My dominant gifts of wind for your wings
lifting you beyond the edge I hold tight
As I glide within your escape
kissing your blood served with my love
and licking the tears of empty fears
for they are filled with salty pleasures
And whisper "thank you for allowing me to watch as you spread your feathers"
"It was truly a gift"
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Re: My Gift
30th Apr 2014 5:10pm
Re: My Gift
30th Apr 2014 5:15pm
My my my!!.. these morning delights you deliver.. are very lovely breaks from the hum drum of work.. my secret garden I go to for rejuvenation..truly enjoyed ..with deepest respect..domore
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re: Re: My Gift
30th Apr 2014 7:37pm
I hope rejuvenation feels great, honored to have served breakfast. Thank you Domore
Re: My Gift
30th Apr 2014 5:16pm
dominance: the gift that keeps giving.
loved this piece of sinister sensuality, Sir.
loved this piece of sinister sensuality, Sir.
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re: Re: My Gift
30th Apr 2014 7:38pm
dominance: the gift that keeps giving - Very well said Madam Shadoe
Thank you for your loving comment
Thank you for your loving comment
Re: My Gift
"My dominant gifts of wind for your wings
lifting you beyond the edge I hold tight
As I glide within your escape"<--you always have lines that make me say, "SHAT"! :)
lifting you beyond the edge I hold tight
As I glide within your escape"<--you always have lines that make me say, "SHAT"! :)
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Re: My Gift
30th Apr 2014 7:42pm
As you always seem to pick the lines I felt had a certain impact all on its own, Thank you for always taking time to read and commenting.
Re: My Gift
30th Apr 2014 9:24pm
Ah, man that last line yielded such greatness. Yet, the first line captivated me beyond measure. Reading you brings such pleasure, Awakenedsoul.
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30th Apr 2014 11:25pm
Re: My Gift
1st May 2014 00:58am
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1st May 2014 1:01am
Re: My Gift
1st May 2014 1:49am
wow... teased. I really like the feeling you portray here. excellent x
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1st May 2014 2:42am
Re: My Gift
1st May 2014 1:55am
You are such an amazing writer. I have no other words except you are truly amazing.
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1st May 2014 2:44am
Re: My Gift
Anonymous
- Edited 1st May 2014 9:53am
1st May 2014 9:50am
Sweet Soul.....what a tribute! Beautiful words that move the wind thru her wings. Whispering how great thy luv is for her. You have found your gift....making luv to her thru your amazing words. Super enjoyed as always. RL for me. Xo :)
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1st May 2014 12:47pm
Re: My Gift
16th Aug 2014 1:53pm