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Lisa
He's not far behind now
can hear his footfall echo
escaped rapist
mental patient
killer
mugger
maybe a touch of all four
prowling the quiet streets in the dead of night
best I slow down my pace
let him pass or grab me from behind
afterall
he has a choice
and he passed
passed me by
unfortunate
wrong choice..
can hear his footfall echo
escaped rapist
mental patient
killer
mugger
maybe a touch of all four
prowling the quiet streets in the dead of night
best I slow down my pace
let him pass or grab me from behind
afterall
he has a choice
and he passed
passed me by
unfortunate
wrong choice..
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re: Re: Lisa
26th Apr 2014 2:08pm
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26th Apr 2014 11:33pm
But is that the only time she lubricates, I wonder. Does she make the predator her prey? Or is it random? I got a million questions now. (Of course because of the orgasm)
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27th Apr 2014 5:33am
The thrill of driving the blade home cannot be matched
heightened be her hatred of men
and the evil acts they commit towards women
she was part of that past
she gave this guy an option a choice
he chose to pass her
unfortunately for him
it's about the kill then
Blade through the eye or ear
death is relatively quick
orgasm the same
heightened be her hatred of men
and the evil acts they commit towards women
she was part of that past
she gave this guy an option a choice
he chose to pass her
unfortunately for him
it's about the kill then
Blade through the eye or ear
death is relatively quick
orgasm the same
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28th Apr 2014 3:14pm
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28th Apr 2014 3:34pm
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Re: Lisa
26th Apr 2014 1:41pm
Re: Lisa
27th Apr 2014 11:03am
I like the not so subtle twist at the end, turning the target into the murderess...
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Re: Lisa
27th Apr 2014 9:36pm
Re: Lisa
28th Apr 2014 5:10pm
hold this for half an hour till dup admits it
then I shall erase the traces
'''''quote..you being a man
must already be fountaining
ur ink
and
she will be expecting
your signature
as she steps on
or pulls out your bulge
and grinds hers
she will ensure
you pour
ere her
and man she will achieve
don't feel shy
we all do more than often
but hate to admit
false pride
legs astride
the flute
now smiles
with open eyes
as drops
now spurt high! ....unquote
sorry for the intrusion
then I shall erase the traces
'''''quote..you being a man
must already be fountaining
ur ink
and
she will be expecting
your signature
as she steps on
or pulls out your bulge
and grinds hers
she will ensure
you pour
ere her
and man she will achieve
don't feel shy
we all do more than often
but hate to admit
false pride
legs astride
the flute
now smiles
with open eyes
as drops
now spurt high! ....unquote
sorry for the intrusion
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re: Re: Lisa
28th Apr 2014 5:14pm