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Haiku Erotic
(For Erotic Haiku Challenge)
Orb
Cum darling,enjoy
this creamy orb dangling
deliciously moist.
Orgasm
Faster Deeper strokes
universe expands inwards
ripples through her core
Seduction
The stroke of his eyes
The heat between her thighs, sighs
Dance of seduction
Orb
Cum darling,enjoy
this creamy orb dangling
deliciously moist.
Orgasm
Faster Deeper strokes
universe expands inwards
ripples through her core
Seduction
The stroke of his eyes
The heat between her thighs, sighs
Dance of seduction
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Re: Haiku Erotic
19th Apr 2014 00:06am
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19th Apr 2014 1:15am
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Re: Haiku Erotic
19th Apr 2014 3:24am
regarding Orb. I could live on that moisture forever, hot skirt, but line two has only 6 syllables.
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Anonymous
20th Apr 2014 6:12am
Oooooo! Coming back with fire in the ink! Enjoyed! :)
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20th Apr 2014 7:32pm
Re: Haiku Erotic
25th Apr 2014 8:29pm
Perfectly executed haiku's
I always loved to write these as well.
nicely done indeed Glynis :)
Zazzles
I always loved to write these as well.
nicely done indeed Glynis :)
Zazzles
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re: Re: Haiku Erotic
25th Apr 2014 11:50pm
Thanks Zazzles!
I didn't win, but it was soooo much fun writing these!
;))
much love!
I didn't win, but it was soooo much fun writing these!
;))
much love!
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