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My Wish (entered in "what do you want" comp)
My Wish
I want to go back in time and space
The abuse I wish to erase
Get back what was taken, at a high cost
At the hands of elder, innocence lost
Fear holding my tongue like rust
I want again, the childlike ability.. to trust….
I want to go back in time and space
The abuse I wish to erase
Get back what was taken, at a high cost
At the hands of elder, innocence lost
Fear holding my tongue like rust
I want again, the childlike ability.. to trust….
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Re: My Wish (entered in "what do you want" comp)
17th Apr 2014 8:22pm
re: Re: My Wish (entered in "what do you want" comp)
17th Apr 2014 8:25pm
Thank you kindly dear Sir P :) I truly value your thoughts on my writes :) with much love and respect...xoxo domore
Re: My Wish (entered in "what do you want" comp)
17th Apr 2014 10:13pm
re: Re: My Wish (entered in "what do you want" comp)
17th Apr 2014 10:20pm
Beautiful Brenda (crim) --sincerest thank you - indeed very heartfelt.. with love and respect..xoxo domore
Re: My Wish (entered in "what do you want" comp)
17th Apr 2014 10:30pm
A wish that we all dream to come true...
Lovely ink, domore. :) Good luck in comp...Xo
Lovely ink, domore. :) Good luck in comp...Xo
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re: Re: My Wish (entered in "what do you want" comp)
17th Apr 2014 10:35pm
awww thank you miss Rain :) I appreciate your comment and the thoughtful "good luck" -- I am a novice at writing..and there are many talented writers who have submittied entries.. but one doesn't succeed, unless they try --right? with love and respect.. xoxo domore
Re: My Wish (entered in "what do you want" comp)
17th Apr 2014 11:50pm
i empathise so deeply with the feeling you've created here domore.
best of luck in the comp xo
best of luck in the comp xo
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re: Re: My Wish (entered in "what do you want" comp)
18th Apr 2014 9:39pm
thank you miss m.. for the read, comment and well wishes for the comp :) with much love and respect..xoxo domore
Re: My Wish (entered in "what do you want" comp)
Anonymous
18th Apr 2014 6:23am
Oh yes.....if only we could all turn back pages in time and hearts......got to wonder at times if our lives would be different. Enjoyed this thought provoking write. Xo :)
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re: Re: My Wish (entered in "what do you want" comp)
18th Apr 2014 9:40pm
Lovely Flower.. I'm glad you enjoyed... and glad to see you back!! you've been missed.. sending hugs..xoxo domore
Re: My Wish (entered in "what do you want" comp)
18th Apr 2014 1:28pm
re: Re: My Wish (entered in "what do you want" comp)
18th Apr 2014 9:47pm
Thank you Mr P.. I am humbled by your words.. with deepest respect... domore
Re: My Wish (entered in "what do you want" comp)
Anonymous
18th Apr 2014 7:35pm
"...the childlike ability.. to trust..." Beautiful and precious. I agree. Love it. P
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re: Re: My Wish (entered in "what do you want" comp)
18th Apr 2014 9:49pm
thank you Primo I am so glad you like.. and I greatly appreciate the RL add.. with respect..xoxo domore
Re: My Wish (entered in "what do you want" comp)
6th May 2014 2:54am
The evilness of abuse robs a child's natural sense of trust and love. A child's only recourse is to shut down. Then to spend a life time doubting hope.
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re: Re: My Wish (entered in "what do you want" comp)
6th May 2014 2:46pm
Thank you R.T.--your words put alot into light for me...I've never quite looked at it in such a way...helps explain alot of the self doubt and second guessing of the actual "good" encountered by victims. with respect..domore