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'Mind-U-Mental'
Slippin' in an escape
from consciousness I, fail to protest
to the incessant submergence
an emergence on the surface of
the third EYE... dwell in this process
n' my mind begins to dream...
now within the subconscious
a contrast of context as the content
readily flows a stream...
so gone far into the realm
of impossibilities, the probabilities
'Our Knot' are not possible yet mystical...
mythical, the metamorphosis
into madness makes malignant
macabre mazes, so amazingly physical...
it's just one moment driven
betwixt the netherworlds
of practicality n' surreality
when one unearths atypical
topics that threaten to burst
the mental's seams...
from consciousness I, fail to protest
to the incessant submergence
an emergence on the surface of
the third EYE... dwell in this process
n' my mind begins to dream...
now within the subconscious
a contrast of context as the content
readily flows a stream...
so gone far into the realm
of impossibilities, the probabilities
'Our Knot' are not possible yet mystical...
mythical, the metamorphosis
into madness makes malignant
macabre mazes, so amazingly physical...
it's just one moment driven
betwixt the netherworlds
of practicality n' surreality
when one unearths atypical
topics that threaten to burst
the mental's seams...
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Re: 'Mind-U-Mental'
24th Mar 2014 5:03pm
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24th Mar 2014 5:15pm
I hear ya lady, but hey at least I'm 'embracing' the I sanctity huh? Lmao thank you my dear, appreciate as always :)
Re: 'Mind-U-Mental'
24th Mar 2014 5:28pm
re: Re: 'Mind-U-Mental'
24th Mar 2014 5:56pm
Aaawwww thank you my sweetness! I'm happy you found this other side to your liking :) appreciate you much :)
Re: 'Mind-U-Mental'
24th Mar 2014 5:38pm
re: Re: 'Mind-U-Mental'
24th Mar 2014 11:42pm
That sounds about right! lol... Thanks bro. as always your support is greatly appreciated :)
Re: 'Mind-U-Mental'
24th Mar 2014 5:48pm
"mythical, the metamorphosis
into madness makes malignant
macabre mazes, so amazingly physical..."
^^^^^^ Whew!!! You've got my mental mangled with this masterpiece! :)
Love it Poe! Dope drawing too...Xo
into madness makes malignant
macabre mazes, so amazingly physical..."
^^^^^^ Whew!!! You've got my mental mangled with this masterpiece! :)
Love it Poe! Dope drawing too...Xo
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re: Re: 'Mind-U-Mental'
24th Mar 2014 11:44pm
Aaaaawwwww me so sorry for the mangled mess! Lol
But yea I'm happy you liked including the drawing :) adore you
Much lady :)
But yea I'm happy you liked including the drawing :) adore you
Much lady :)
Re: 'Mind-U-Mental'
24th Mar 2014 6:06pm
Awesome write, I really enjoyed this piece! this definitely goes in my reading list :)
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re: Re: 'Mind-U-Mental'
24th Mar 2014 11:45pm
Gosh, you have my lil heart all a flutter now :) thank u sweetheart! Appreciate ur sweet words n the add to ur list! :)
Re: 'Mind-U-Mental'
24th Mar 2014 9:54pm
love the alliteration and message in this one... You never cease to amaze me with your words/skills :)
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re: Re: 'Mind-U-Mental'
24th Mar 2014 11:48pm
Aaaawwww well I hope ur never gonna be disappointed my dear! Thank you so much I truly appreciate it :)
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re: Re: 'Mind-U-Mental'
25th Mar 2014 3:52am
Hey stranger! lol sooo happy to hear from you my friend
N truly appreciate ur thoughts on my ink :) third eye blind huh?
hhhhmmmm that's a musical group right?
N truly appreciate ur thoughts on my ink :) third eye blind huh?
hhhhmmmm that's a musical group right?
Re: 'Mind-U-Mental'
25th Mar 2014 7:48pm
re: Re: 'Mind-U-Mental'
25th Mar 2014 8:50pm
Aaaawwww thank you sweet flower, your too wonderful
But don't ever change! :) appreciate u lady :)
But don't ever change! :) appreciate u lady :)
Re: 'Mind-U-Mental'
26th Mar 2014 8:03pm
re: Re: 'Mind-U-Mental'
26th Mar 2014 9:45pm
Thank you so much bro! Truly grateful for your thoughts n continued support :)
Re: 'Mind-U-Mental'
26th Mar 2014 9:21pm
this was Phenomenal!!!!
"mythical, the metamorphosis
into madness makes malignant
macabre mazes, so amazingly physical..." love that stanza
"mythical, the metamorphosis
into madness makes malignant
macabre mazes, so amazingly physical..." love that stanza
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re: Re: 'Mind-U-Mental'
26th Mar 2014 9:47pm
Aaaaawwww you do know how to make me feel all giddy inside my sweetness :) thank you! appreciate you so much :)
Re: 'Mind-U-Mental'
28th Mar 2014 2:02pm
Re. 'Mind-U-Mental'
21st Dec 2016 2:29am
Poe, your dark mental benderz corner me every time. Lurve this my friend, Lady.
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Re: Re. 'Mind-U-Mental'
21st Dec 2016 9:27am
Wow... My Lady R has went back
into the archives!? Love when people do that! it's a huge compliment to me
:) n yea I'm thinkin' 'bendin' you a corner...hhhhhmmm lol thank you my dearest, deeply grateful always :)
into the archives!? Love when people do that! it's a huge compliment to me
:) n yea I'm thinkin' 'bendin' you a corner...hhhhhmmm lol thank you my dearest, deeply grateful always :)