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Pulling
He wants to feel her screams
all through his bulging veins
She needs him to pull her down
so she can finally find her way
all through his bulging veins
She needs him to pull her down
so she can finally find her way
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Re: Pulling
6th Feb 2014 6:37pm
Reading between the lines, that was HOT!!!
Great read sweet TOMMIE!!!
Sir Lancelott
I got a new one
Great read sweet TOMMIE!!!
Sir Lancelott
I got a new one
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re: Re: Pulling
6th Feb 2014 6:40pm
Re: Pulling
6th Feb 2014 7:20pm
Finally find her way to where? Cloud 9? Hehe
Enjoyed. I really love your style of writing.
Enjoyed. I really love your style of writing.
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Re: Pulling
6th Feb 2014 7:23pm
Her way or the highway, right? LOL...always nice to have your feedback SJ. :)
Re: Pulling
Anonymous
6th Feb 2014 8:09pm
Eye have two bulging vanes...roach
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Re: Pulling
Anonymous
6th Feb 2014 8:35pm
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Re: Pulling
7th Feb 2014 10:22pm
I say pin that pussy in the lockdown position and then she can't get away. All she can do then is wiggle and poot.
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re: Re: Pulling
7th Feb 2014 10:31pm