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Falling

Shapeless words
like water they
have no form
as you fall from
my lips
tommielynn
Written by tommielynn (Tommie Lynn)
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Re: Falling
(Joy)
6th Feb 2014 1:31pm
Wow!

Another beautiful write!
silhouettejoy
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re: Re: Falling
(Tommie Lynn)
6th Feb 2014 1:43pm
I always enjoy your comments SJ, thank you dear. :)
tommielynn
Re: Falling
6th Feb 2014 1:51pm
wonderful write
airy and satisfying
PoetSpeak
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re: Re: Falling
(Tommie Lynn)
6th Feb 2014 2:18pm
Well thanks a bunch PS. :)
tommielynn
Re: Falling
Anonymous
6th Feb 2014 8:08pm
tommy youse super duper storm troopery wryter poeitess type gyrl....fallin' on a hawt air baloon......roach
Anonymous
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re: Re: Falling
(Tommie Lynn)
6th Feb 2014 8:30pm
Appreciate you reading RM
tommielynn
Re: Falling
7th Feb 2014 6:56pm
Another grammy my lady! Short and to the point
Dirtfarm
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re: Re: Falling
(Tommie Lynn)
7th Feb 2014 7:18pm
Thank you kindly Dirt. :)
tommielynn
Re: Falling
(Antonio Duarte)
9th Feb 2014 8:34pm
wow this strong words tht fall from ur lips with purpose
BlackSoul
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re: Re: Falling
(Tommie Lynn)
9th Feb 2014 8:40pm
Always a pleasure having you read me BS. Thank you. :)
tommielynn

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