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fervently she chirps
the lone frustrated sparrow
hidden in the rime

Written by LobodeSanPedro

Published 6th Feb 2014

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13th Feb 2014 3:41am

phenomenally good play on rime and rhyme.
Frozen in time by our words and frozen by the encompassing frost

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13th Feb 2014 3:57am

Thank you for the feedback and peeling back the layers on this piece

Salud

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