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5:55am
Laying in bed
awake
I shouldn't be
this is early
too early
I just went to
bed
head pounding
dog's excited
to see me
want to be
let outside
I just want
coffee
fuck me
I gotta
pee
I know the
second
I get up
from this
warm bed
the whole
house
will hear me
I need quite
just until I
drink
my first
cup of
joe
why the fuck
am I up
right now
awake
I shouldn't be
this is early
too early
I just went to
bed
head pounding
dog's excited
to see me
want to be
let outside
I just want
coffee
fuck me
I gotta
pee
I know the
second
I get up
from this
warm bed
the whole
house
will hear me
I need quite
just until I
drink
my first
cup of
joe
why the fuck
am I up
right now
Published 30th Jan 2014
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Anonymous
30th Jan 2014 11:06am
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30th Jan 2014 11:21am
Always enjoy your comments Gabriel, I'm just rambling on today.That first cup is so important ;) I love it more then anything.Thank you so much for reading my nonsense :-)
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30th Jan 2014 2:57pm
The only social thing in the morning for me is coffee, so relate to this ink.
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30th Jan 2014 5:03pm
I love the realism and honesty in this piece. I can feel you inside and out. Wonderful scribe :)
30th Jan 2014 5:07pm
