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Numb
words mean nothing
when spoken by weak
rambling hushed voices
poems are lost
in the blackness
of a once twinkling eye
love leaves lips
showing every crack
upon such soft tender skin
left feeling numb
while the blood drips
falling and splattering inside
when spoken by weak
rambling hushed voices
poems are lost
in the blackness
of a once twinkling eye
love leaves lips
showing every crack
upon such soft tender skin
left feeling numb
while the blood drips
falling and splattering inside
Published 30th Jan 2014
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31st Jan 2014 1:28am
How to make it obvious to you how much I like this? Added to my reading list, but more than that...ah! I know what to say: I am in love with this poem.
31st Jan 2014 1:34am
31st Jan 2014 9:07am
I was drawn in by the title feeling numb myself.. this poem is creative and speaks volumes.. much love Crim
31st Jan 2014 1:03pm
