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Colors of Intimacy
The colors of intimacy
Much to explore.
Gentleness and broken glass
Sweet touch and raw sensation
We are a color that hasn't been invented
Never seen by the universe
But we exist
And we shine…
Much to explore.
Gentleness and broken glass
Sweet touch and raw sensation
We are a color that hasn't been invented
Never seen by the universe
But we exist
And we shine…
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Re: Colors of Intimacy
24th Jan 2014 5:30pm
Re: Colors of Intimacy
24th Jan 2014 5:36pm
Re: Colors of Intimacy
Anonymous
24th Jan 2014 6:02pm
The unexplainable phenomena we all want and need, well said Speak
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Re: Colors of Intimacy
24th Jan 2014 6:08pm
Re: Colors of Intimacy
24th Jan 2014 7:47pm
Re: Colors of Intimacy
24th Jan 2014 8:16pm
Re: Colors of Intimacy
24th Jan 2014 9:06pm
A wonderful poem..."gentleness and broken glass"
I just kept reading this one. Something about your voice of experience. Something I lack and glad to read in your work. :)
I just kept reading this one. Something about your voice of experience. Something I lack and glad to read in your work. :)
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Re: Colors of Intimacy
24th Jan 2014 9:23pm
Thank you
I note you are 42. I've got a bunch more on top of that. You get the wisdom package at certain age. Then all the things you couldn't see before start to become crystal clear. It's no longer about right and wrong. It becomes, what you can live with and accept as your truth.
Keep plugging away. It's a long game.
I note you are 42. I've got a bunch more on top of that. You get the wisdom package at certain age. Then all the things you couldn't see before start to become crystal clear. It's no longer about right and wrong. It becomes, what you can live with and accept as your truth.
Keep plugging away. It's a long game.
Re: Colors of Intimacy
24th Jan 2014 9:57pm
Re: Colors of Intimacy
24th Jan 2014 10:16pm
Re: Colors of Intimacy
24th Jan 2014 10:32pm
Gentleness and broken glass...
Softly expelled, so beautifully read. Yummy.
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Softly expelled, so beautifully read. Yummy.
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Re: Colors of Intimacy
24th Jan 2014 10:41pm
Re: Colors of Intimacy
24th Jan 2014 10:47pm
'Colors of intimacy. [...]
We are a color that hasn't been invented.
That's a perfect way to describe the
relationship between two lovers. You found
so gentle and erotic words. Love it.
We are a color that hasn't been invented.
That's a perfect way to describe the
relationship between two lovers. You found
so gentle and erotic words. Love it.
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Re: Colors of Intimacy
24th Jan 2014 10:53pm
Love can do that to a man. The edge falls away and the beacon of light shines through.
I do thank you for your kind words.
I do thank you for your kind words.
Re: Colors of Intimacy
25th Jan 2014 2:41am
Oh god yes. Beautiful as usual.
We are a color that hasn't been invented
Never seen by the universe
But we exist
And we shine…
your ending was brilliant
We are a color that hasn't been invented
Never seen by the universe
But we exist
And we shine…
your ending was brilliant
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Re: Colors of Intimacy
25th Jan 2014 8:55am
Thanks so much for your comments.
I love reading your work too.
Its a win win lately. Maybe. I should start playing lotto again.
I love reading your work too.
Its a win win lately. Maybe. I should start playing lotto again.
Re. Colors of Intimacy
8th Feb 2021 4:28am
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You actually went back and did as I asked
I'm so impressed
That rarely happens
I since deleted that poem because I was feeling weird about needing validation for my writing. Back then for a little poem like this I got over 900 reads. Crazy huh ??
You are a true friend Red
Thank you for the RL add too !!
Back then it really meant something
Xx
I'm so impressed
That rarely happens
I since deleted that poem because I was feeling weird about needing validation for my writing. Back then for a little poem like this I got over 900 reads. Crazy huh ??
You are a true friend Red
Thank you for the RL add too !!
Back then it really meant something
Xx