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Her Vortex
Summer
Contours of lust
All around us
Deep inside Vixen
Secrets exposed
Her vortex
Revealed
She gives all
She doesn't break easily
But
Don’t toy with her heart
She’ll take you down
And leave you broken
Better to treat her well
She’s the real deal
A beautiful soul
Walk with her hand in hand
She’ll be yours for the asking
Vixen
The essence of desire
Flight and elevation
Vixen
A rare wine to be opened
And to consume…
Contours of lust
All around us
Deep inside Vixen
Secrets exposed
Her vortex
Revealed
She gives all
She doesn't break easily
But
Don’t toy with her heart
She’ll take you down
And leave you broken
Better to treat her well
She’s the real deal
A beautiful soul
Walk with her hand in hand
She’ll be yours for the asking
Vixen
The essence of desire
Flight and elevation
Vixen
A rare wine to be opened
And to consume…
Published 22nd Jan 2014
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22nd Jan 2014 9:24pm
22nd Jan 2014 9:30pm
Anonymous
22nd Jan 2014 10:09pm
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22nd Jan 2014 10:12pm
22nd Jan 2014 10:15pm
Vixen
The essence of desire
Flight and elevation
This was seductively beautiful. Great work.
The essence of desire
Flight and elevation
This was seductively beautiful. Great work.
22nd Jan 2014 10:17pm
Many thanks
You do your best work when you have quality people to write about.
I appreciate your comments.
You do your best work when you have quality people to write about.
I appreciate your comments.
22nd Jan 2014 11:28pm
22nd Jan 2014 11:45pm
23rd Jan 2014 1:06am
Wooded and sexy... captivating piece sir, your words lick the thoughts that are conjured.
xx
xx
23rd Jan 2014 1:30am
Anonymous
23rd Jan 2014 2:11am
Confidence is sexy and all Vixens know that ;)
You captured the aura very well, nice!
You captured the aura very well, nice!
23rd Jan 2014 2:21am
Yes, you are right about the confidence part.
Smart, highly sensual and deep women are my weakness and strength. Present company included.
Xo
Smart, highly sensual and deep women are my weakness and strength. Present company included.
Xo
23rd Jan 2014 2:42am
23rd Jan 2014 2:52am
Anonymous
25th Jan 2015 7:33pm
that is quite the woman you describe, cowboy. quite the woman indeed.
i love the line "she'll be yours for the asking." damn straight you'll be asking and not taking! very good.
i love the line "she'll be yours for the asking." damn straight you'll be asking and not taking! very good.
25th Jan 2015 8:11pm
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24th May 2024 2:29pm
I saw a picture of her on IG a few days ago.
She let her hair go all gray and it looked pretty good.
She was heavier but she was never thin. Had it in the right places that attracted me back then. We had a falling out about 6 years ago. We might connect on IG occasionally for a moment. She’s a photographer and I’m an artist so there is some glue there. Times change but this was a favorite poem of mine when I was just starting to write poetry. I always need someone to write about … I’m glad you found this one …
Thanks LJ
She let her hair go all gray and it looked pretty good.
She was heavier but she was never thin. Had it in the right places that attracted me back then. We had a falling out about 6 years ago. We might connect on IG occasionally for a moment. She’s a photographer and I’m an artist so there is some glue there. Times change but this was a favorite poem of mine when I was just starting to write poetry. I always need someone to write about … I’m glad you found this one …
Thanks LJ
