His Beautiful Mind

she leaves her scent
on his skin,
fresh pomegranate  

... my love does love her pomegranate - so I do love this verse

... excellent blend of languages ... powerful last verse

LSP

Thank you LSP....I'm happy you enjoyed it.

this is so loving Tommie :) peace Crim

I appreciate you stopping by Crim,thank you.

And this is beautiful

Thank you HottNess :)

simple and sweet  to the ears

Thank you, again.

"She is his softness" Mmmm. That's all cream babe. Smooth and sexy as hell. Thank you Tommie.

I'm so glad you like it TS, thank you ;)

I call a poem "good" if we want to read it several times.  I read this several times.  Molto bene.

Thanks for reading TheGettyAveKid.

 Great work!

Thank you FA

I'm back in on this one lady. It really is so powerful in its tenderness. To be "Him". Theres a lucky lad. Truly beautiful TL. Again thank you Doll.

OHH TS, your comment is the best...I am so thankful!! ;)

really enjoyed this light touch

Thanks for reading whale.

Favourite line: She is his earth

(Sense double entendre here - after all, the earth is where man puts his seed)

You got it SS..great comment, thank you.

you have a really beautiful mind
more comment
on your single poem
than mine all combined
you do shine

keep it up
your creamy ink  does endure
and so many
would love to have
much more