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Revised, Revisited: 'Beauty Immortal'
Beauty Immortal
your love
could never die
why you calling me
tauntingly,
you keep haunting
me...
with those 'life-lived'
eyes...
now my mind
starts
to fantasize
each day I awake
I see the sun light
up the day...HEY
see how you,
set my mind astray?
My dear,
beauty immortal
for you now I see
your life has proved to be
just one of plastic
ceramic or clay...
yet, once 'charge' has expelled
my dear beauty immortal
your reality's gone away...
your love
could never die
why you calling me
tauntingly,
you keep haunting
me...
with those 'life-lived'
eyes...
now my mind
starts
to fantasize
each day I awake
I see the sun light
up the day...HEY
see how you,
set my mind astray?
My dear,
beauty immortal
for you now I see
your life has proved to be
just one of plastic
ceramic or clay...
yet, once 'charge' has expelled
my dear beauty immortal
your reality's gone away...
Published 14th Dec 2013
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14th Dec 2013 7:22pm
14th Dec 2013 7:35pm
Sweetie, you move fast! lol thank you, happy you liked it
As always I'm grateful for ur support :)
As always I'm grateful for ur support :)
14th Dec 2013 8:05pm
This poem's gonna be stuck in my mind...once again as always..awesome work...
14th Dec 2013 9:01pm
14th Dec 2013 9:03pm
15th Dec 2013 1:42pm
15th Dec 2013 2:18pm
Hi my sweet beauty! Gosh u know how much i love ur praise right? Thank u always! Appreciate u greatly :)
15th Dec 2013 6:51pm
Immortal words to match the immortal beauty you speak of, very lovely, Poetic:)~
16th Dec 2013 1:47am
Thanks so much my dear bro! Ur kindness knows no bounds
N I'm forever grateful for your support :)
N I'm forever grateful for your support :)
16th Dec 2013 00:46am
Now that's some sexy love poetry their my friend. Your flow captivates the lines you put forth. Poetic brilliance!
16th Dec 2013 2:25am
Bro. You gonna float away if you up swelling my head up lol
But I do truly appreciate you always! :)
But I do truly appreciate you always! :)
16th Dec 2013 1:41am
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16th Dec 2013 12:41pm
Really super sweet of you n I'm happy to know you do! Thank you my sweet Rain :)
16th Dec 2013 2:34am
16th Dec 2013 12:43pm
Aaaaawwww... C'mere n let me kiss u! lol
Thank u so much lady! Truly flattered n grateful
for your support :)
Thank u so much lady! Truly flattered n grateful
for your support :)
Anonymous
16th Dec 2013 6:15am
Beautiful immortal words PIKM, romanticism at its best :)
16th Dec 2013 12:44pm
Thank you my Lady Vee :) ur so wonderful to me!
:) appreciate you as always :)
:) appreciate you as always :)
Anonymous
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16th Dec 2013 2:34pm
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16th Dec 2013 2:43pm
Aaaawwww my sweetheart, ur comment felt magical... Thank you! Appreciate you :)
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16th Dec 2013 9:49pm
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18th Dec 2013 00:31am
Aaaawwww thank you my friend, nice to see you on my page
again n truly appreciate your support :)
again n truly appreciate your support :)
18th Dec 2013 1:23pm
"yet, once 'charge' has expelled
my dear beauty immortal
your reality's gone away..."
Awwwww...for some reason the song by Lulu and the lampshades..aka the cup song..is playing in my mind reading this! :)
my dear beauty immortal
your reality's gone away..."
Awwwww...for some reason the song by Lulu and the lampshades..aka the cup song..is playing in my mind reading this! :)
18th Dec 2013 2:41pm
I'm not sure I ever heard that so g BUT if this moved you
I'm happy it reminded you of it! :) thank you
sweet one, always n forever, I'm grateful :)
I'm happy it reminded you of it! :) thank you
sweet one, always n forever, I'm grateful :)
18th Dec 2013 2:53pm
I'm not sure I ever heard that song BUT if this moved you
I'm happy it reminded you of it! :) thank you
sweet one, always n forever, I'm grateful :)
I'm happy it reminded you of it! :) thank you
sweet one, always n forever, I'm grateful :)
5th Jan 2014 1:26pm
Enjoying every word Mr P. Flash stylin. Draws me in from the start. Flow brother.
5th Jan 2014 1:55pm
Thanks once more sir! Nice knowing you can feel my flow, it mean a lot, n I truly appreciate the support :)
