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Depression
It woke me my dreary skies
wrapping me inside my melancholy.
I felt miserable within its depressive touch
like a child with a fever,
I covered up.
Allowing sorrow to hold me through
lifeless strokes across my unhappiness with
uninspiring whispers that
lowered my resistance.
Sadness feed me,
nurtured my sorrow while
dejection’s unhappy melody
sang the blues to my despondence.
In misery I fell off the cliff inside my woe
becoming Depression’s crowning glory
wrapping me inside my melancholy.
I felt miserable within its depressive touch
like a child with a fever,
I covered up.
Allowing sorrow to hold me through
lifeless strokes across my unhappiness with
uninspiring whispers that
lowered my resistance.
Sadness feed me,
nurtured my sorrow while
dejection’s unhappy melody
sang the blues to my despondence.
In misery I fell off the cliff inside my woe
becoming Depression’s crowning glory
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Re: Depression
9th Dec 2013 11:14pm
A Beautiful way to weave such things Dear Glynis-Your Writes have been missed!!!
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re: Re: Depression
29th May 2014 7:28pm
Sorry I'm just getting to this Soul!
I wasn't aware I hadn't replied.
Thank you Brother!
I wasn't aware I hadn't replied.
Thank you Brother!
re: re: Re: Depression
30th May 2014 1:42am
Never worries Dear Glynis-As long as You see them Dear-and Know You are Treasured!!!
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Re: Depression
10th Dec 2013 1:11am
SO Powerful Girl...
Have felt this same way for a while now...
You encompassed the feeling to completion...
XOXO
Fire
Have felt this same way for a while now...
You encompassed the feeling to completion...
XOXO
Fire
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re: Re: Depression
29th May 2014 7:29pm
Thank you Fire!
I hope you are weaving your way clear of the gloom my sista!
love you much
I hope you are weaving your way clear of the gloom my sista!
love you much
Re: Depression
10th Dec 2013 2:13am
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29th May 2014 7:30pm
Re: Depression
10th Dec 2013 2:42pm
Goodness! This is incredible Glynis! You depicted depression beautifully! Missed reading your work doll...Xo
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re: Re: Depression
29th May 2014 7:31pm
Thank you my Lovely Rain!
Your words are always so kind my Sis!
much love Queen
Your words are always so kind my Sis!
much love Queen
Re: Depression
Anonymous
10th Dec 2013 10:05pm
I have been there and this gives an intense description of some of it. Well done, G!
Peace n love xx
Peace n love xx
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re: Re: Depression
29th May 2014 7:33pm
I sorry that you have Miki, but I know you are the one to conquer it.
Thank you Sis!
much love
Thank you Sis!
much love
Re: Depression
26th Dec 2013 5:56am
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29th May 2014 7:38pm
Re: Depression
Anonymous
2nd Feb 2014 9:48pm
Sadness drips off the page and I to our hearts. Hope that you are better now. You know I'm hear for you. Sending luv, hugs and smiles. Luv ya...xo :)
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re: Re: Depression
29th May 2014 7:40pm
I know that you are always there for me thank you.
I'm fine btw, live isn't always smiles and sunshine, but the gloom never last long.
much love Sis!
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29th May 2014 7:40pm
Re: Depression
Anonymous
22nd Mar 2014 6:42pm
A lovely poem about the relatable subject of depression. Well done :)
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re: Re: Depression
29th May 2014 7:41pm
Re: Depression
29th May 2014 6:15pm
I have been there and back al my life.
I love you Glynis, my sister in ink, and soul
Broomie Xo
I love you Glynis, my sister in ink, and soul
Broomie Xo
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re: Re: Depression
29th May 2014 7:27pm
Thank you Broomie!
You know I haven't answered anyone here. I'm not sure why.
love you too Sis!
You know I haven't answered anyone here. I'm not sure why.
love you too Sis!
Re: Depression
29th May 2014 7:44pm
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1st Jun 2014 3:27am