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With closed eyes, love is a dreamy hue
I spent all day, dreaming...
while staring at your picture
spent a hot minute, visualizing
you in my arms, a fixture...
adorning my heart
I lay into myself,
kissing thoughts of your
sweet whispers,
that reveal... You can feel it too.
Oh god how I wanna
make love to you
pull the sadness
from your naked flesh
how I long the lick your soul
into heaven
as I suckle the wanton need
teeming from your supple breasts
damn sweet babygirl,
I yearn
to be tied into your arms
you clinging to my body,
as I protect you from all harm
our bodies thrusted together,
I empty my all, into the depths
of your molten walls,
as feeling the pleasure
of me loving you
makes only joyous teardrops fall...
while staring at your picture
spent a hot minute, visualizing
you in my arms, a fixture...
adorning my heart
I lay into myself,
kissing thoughts of your
sweet whispers,
that reveal... You can feel it too.
Oh god how I wanna
make love to you
pull the sadness
from your naked flesh
how I long the lick your soul
into heaven
as I suckle the wanton need
teeming from your supple breasts
damn sweet babygirl,
I yearn
to be tied into your arms
you clinging to my body,
as I protect you from all harm
our bodies thrusted together,
I empty my all, into the depths
of your molten walls,
as feeling the pleasure
of me loving you
makes only joyous teardrops fall...
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Re: With closed eyes, love is a dreamy hue
3rd Dec 2013 4:24pm
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3rd Dec 2013 4:30pm
Lmao, that was the tears the woman cried lol n yes I did, but I used the camera app to make the frame because I was too lazy to draw a actual frame lol
Re: With closed eyes, love is a dreamy hue
3rd Dec 2013 4:35pm
re: Re: With closed eyes, love is a dreamy hue
3rd Dec 2013 4:39pm
Aaaawww listen to you being all super sweet... I love that though n yea u got me smiling, becuz I know you're vicious with the pen n if u approve? I must be on the right track! lol
Thank you mamacita!
Thank you mamacita!
Re: With closed eyes, love is a dreamy hue
Anonymous
3rd Dec 2013 4:56pm
Wow this is so gentle and full of love. Beautiful!
P.S. I like the pic.
P.S. I like the pic.
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re: Re: With closed eyes, love is a dreamy hue
3rd Dec 2013 5:00pm
Thank u, I'm happy you like both my write n my drawing :) truly appreciate ur thoughts :)
Re: With closed eyes, love is a dreamy hue
3rd Dec 2013 5:02pm
Poe such a passionate, sensual,tender write.. I love it!!! much love Crim :)
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re: Re: With closed eyes, love is a dreamy hue
3rd Dec 2013 5:46pm
Thank you! Truly wonderfully sweet of you!
I'm happy u liked n appreciate u always
I'm happy u liked n appreciate u always
Re: With closed eyes, love is a dreamy hue
3rd Dec 2013 5:23pm
"as feeling the pleasure
of me loving you
makes only joyous teardrops" this is when you know it's what it is suppose to be!
of me loving you
makes only joyous teardrops" this is when you know it's what it is suppose to be!
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re: Re: With closed eyes, love is a dreamy hue
3rd Dec 2013 5:48pm
Truly, but sadly it's just my overactive imagination
at work, trying to will it into reality lol
I do adore u though n appreciate you sweet one :)
at work, trying to will it into reality lol
I do adore u though n appreciate you sweet one :)
Re: With closed eyes, love is a dreamy hue
3rd Dec 2013 5:38pm
....somebody is smitten with their new muse....aww....words can hook ya. :) Dreamy hues never read so beautiful... Love it! Xo
Crush on Poe~
Crush on Poe~
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re: Re: With closed eyes, love is a dreamy hue
3rd Dec 2013 5:49pm
Rain you would be right...normally, but nope, no one actually wants me n this is just my insane brain at work
I do truly love ur support though :) thank u sweetheart :)
I do truly love ur support though :) thank u sweetheart :)
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3rd Dec 2013 6:46pm
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3rd Dec 2013 7:52pm
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3rd Dec 2013 7:00pm
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3rd Dec 2013 7:55pm
Re: With closed eyes, love is a dreamy hue
4th Dec 2013 1:04am
Your the man bro...you have all the ladies giving you all their love lol (peace)
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re: Re: With closed eyes, love is a dreamy hue
4th Dec 2013 1:27am
Lmao yea so it seems, but make no mistake about it bro.
Not a single one are doing it in real life lol
Thanks for the smile though n the support! :)
Not a single one are doing it in real life lol
Thanks for the smile though n the support! :)
Re: With closed eyes, love is a dreamy hue
4th Dec 2013 1:17am
Wow, your words leave teardrops on my eyes. I am left betwixt, any girl would be lucky to have a man of such sweet words. :). And the picture's beautiful. :).
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re: Re: With closed eyes, love is a dreamy hue
4th Dec 2013 1:30am
A duo of compliments! Wowzers lol thank you
so much, I am pleased u liked both , the drawing
as all my drawings tend to be is n was a piece that prompted the ink :)
so much, I am pleased u liked both , the drawing
as all my drawings tend to be is n was a piece that prompted the ink :)
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re: Re: With closed eyes, love is a dreamy hue
4th Dec 2013 3:21pm
Thank you my sweet Lily! Yes I think you're right
Sadly for many, like myself it's all too often just a dream that never comes true... appreciate ur support always! :)
Sadly for many, like myself it's all too often just a dream that never comes true... appreciate ur support always! :)
Re: With closed eyes, love is a dreamy hue
4th Dec 2013 9:52pm
It is reads like this that get me through the day and make my eyes sparkle
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re: Re: With closed eyes, love is a dreamy hue
5th Dec 2013 00:52am
Aaaaawwwww sweetheart! C'mere n let me kiss u!! What a very sweet comment! U just made my day :) thank u
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5th Dec 2013 10:06pm
Re: With closed eyes, love is a dreamy hue
5th Dec 2013 4:43am
My Bro. That was an Awesome piece!!!
Well written man!!
Sensual read! I enjoyed!!
Sir Lancelott
Well written man!!
Sensual read! I enjoyed!!
Sir Lancelott
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re: Re: With closed eyes, love is a dreamy hue
5th Dec 2013 5:26am
Thanks bro! Truly flattered n honored by your thoughts n support, happy you enjoyed this ink bro. :)
Re: With closed eyes, love is a dreamy hue
9th Dec 2013 2:36am
Well done my friend pure poetic bliss wrapped in loves blanket. Always a blessing to read fine poetry. Thanks!
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