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'Peeking around Shadows'
The pain
So deep
Inside...
They hide
To keep
Locked...
Behind their plastic grins
They create their illusions
To disguise
Their morbid sins...
Storie's been told
Again and again
Why not
Ask Forgiveness then?
Let the healing begin...
Examine an excerpt of a life back when
I ask this of you, look deeper my friend
Change happens...
It’s more than a possibility
Discover new ways
Try to diffuse a hostility
Use more than your ears
To hear the tears that cry
Discover the goodness
In oneself it lives inside
Life’s simple...
Pleasures can mean so much
Spiteful one, get in touch
I, like you work on improving...
To strengthen my spirit
and keep on moving.
So deep
Inside...
They hide
To keep
Locked...
Behind their plastic grins
They create their illusions
To disguise
Their morbid sins...
Storie's been told
Again and again
Why not
Ask Forgiveness then?
Let the healing begin...
Examine an excerpt of a life back when
I ask this of you, look deeper my friend
Change happens...
It’s more than a possibility
Discover new ways
Try to diffuse a hostility
Use more than your ears
To hear the tears that cry
Discover the goodness
In oneself it lives inside
Life’s simple...
Pleasures can mean so much
Spiteful one, get in touch
I, like you work on improving...
To strengthen my spirit
and keep on moving.
Published 3rd Dec 2013
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3rd Dec 2013 2:51am
3rd Dec 2013 2:53am
3rd Dec 2013 2:55am
I feel this in my heart I know I can use some improving.. moving inking Poe.. much love Crim :)
3rd Dec 2013 3:06am
Thank you my sweet one! Yea, I can use it too
so ur not alone lady :) appreciate u so much :)
so ur not alone lady :) appreciate u so much :)
3rd Dec 2013 3:09am
Oh you armed yourself with wisdom my friend! Quite the philosopher in this piece. This ink is so easy to receive. Well done...Xo
Pen on Poe....
Pen on Poe....
3rd Dec 2013 3:24am
3rd Dec 2013 3:10am
Oh my so wonderful I can tell this came from your heart. You wrote it so beautifully I love it. My favorite lines
I, like you work on improving....
To strengthen my spirit
and keep on moving.
This is very true.
Thanks for the read.
Raven.
I, like you work on improving....
To strengthen my spirit
and keep on moving.
This is very true.
Thanks for the read.
Raven.
3rd Dec 2013 3:25am
Raven! Wow u commented another piece! Awesome imma do the jig! lol... Truly appreciate you my friend :)
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3rd Dec 2013 1:50pm
Thank you BA! I'm happy you found it pleasing, n as always your support means the world to me :)
3rd Dec 2013 3:33pm
3rd Dec 2013 4:48pm
Grace! My sweet one, how u been? So happy to see u here on my pages again :) thank u my dear, appreciate n adore always :)
9th Dec 2013 2:56am
Beautiful my friend wrote with so much style & grace. From one King to another I bow before you to show honor & respect! Keep them blazing pieces of poetry coming.
