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If only for One Night
For this one night...
Allow me to show you,
what you mean to me
let's brazenly pretend
there's no one else but we
just one night...
the wings of love
shall soar ever high
the fullness in my heart,
forces my eyes to cry
if we had one night
I'd give into joyous emotions
that dance forever internal
blessed the beauty I see
far surpasses the external
god, if I had one lil night
shamelessly I would beg
feed my starving soul a love's buffet
then simply seal it with a kiss...
leaving my heart nothing more to say.
Allow me to show you,
what you mean to me
let's brazenly pretend
there's no one else but we
just one night...
the wings of love
shall soar ever high
the fullness in my heart,
forces my eyes to cry
if we had one night
I'd give into joyous emotions
that dance forever internal
blessed the beauty I see
far surpasses the external
god, if I had one lil night
shamelessly I would beg
feed my starving soul a love's buffet
then simply seal it with a kiss...
leaving my heart nothing more to say.
Published 1st Dec 2013
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1st Dec 2013 3:18pm
Such an emotional write should
be rewarded with more than one
night of passion and lust ...
I love it, Poe and enjoyed it much!
be rewarded with more than one
night of passion and lust ...
I love it, Poe and enjoyed it much!
1st Dec 2013 3:29pm
I agree, but at this point of desperation
If ONE is all I could get.... Lol
Thank u so much sweetheart, appreciate u :)
If ONE is all I could get.... Lol
Thank u so much sweetheart, appreciate u :)
1st Dec 2013 3:27pm
1st Dec 2013 4:00pm
1st Dec 2013 3:31pm
so much passion you have Poe! overflowing in this sensually beautiful inking.. much love Crim :)
1st Dec 2013 4:04pm
Thank u n Yea I know, kinda spilling at the seams with it lol
Appreciate u sweetheart so much :)
Appreciate u sweetheart so much :)
1st Dec 2013 4:06pm
1st Dec 2013 4:50pm
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1st Dec 2013 4:53pm
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1st Dec 2013 5:20pm
1st Dec 2013 6:34pm
...simply stunning by design. Just one night would be enough, I'm sure.
Flow on~
Flow on~
1st Dec 2013 7:18pm
My beautiful Rain, thank you so much :)
I'm grateful for your support always
I'm grateful for your support always
1st Dec 2013 8:13pm
How sweet! this is beautiful, it takes me to the Disney movie Aladdin...just beautiful!
1st Dec 2013 8:23pm
Anyone who can mention a Disney character or movie
has my instant adoration becuz I'm the original Walt Disneys biggest fan! he was a great artist n my inspiration
for art n storytelling lol thank u so much sweetness :)
has my instant adoration becuz I'm the original Walt Disneys biggest fan! he was a great artist n my inspiration
for art n storytelling lol thank u so much sweetness :)
1st Dec 2013 10:42pm
Ahhh PIKM this is sublime and so beautiful, tugging at the heart, a boundless passion so well depicted :)
2nd Dec 2013 5:09am
Thank you my dear, always a pleasure to get a visit from you n I'm truly grateful too :)
1st Dec 2013 10:54pm
2nd Dec 2013 5:10am
2nd Dec 2013 1:44am
This is a very powerful piece here my friend. So emotional, leaves you breathless. My favorite line, God if I had one lil night
shamelessly I would beg
feed my starving soul a love's buffet
then simply seal it with a kiss.... Excellent written piece of poetry.
shamelessly I would beg
feed my starving soul a love's buffet
then simply seal it with a kiss.... Excellent written piece of poetry.
2nd Dec 2013 5:12am
Bro. Ur such a charge of positive energy
that I feel compelled to keep trying to
bring something worth your time, truly honored n humbled by your words n support :)
that I feel compelled to keep trying to
bring something worth your time, truly honored n humbled by your words n support :)
2nd Dec 2013 1:56am
Melting hearts like ice caps with this one :) Passionately Penned!! I truly enjoyed
2nd Dec 2013 5:16am
If it melted yours, I'd be honored! :) thank u my sweet lady
Always n forever grateful for your support :)
Always n forever grateful for your support :)
2nd Dec 2013 1:26pm
It may sound sad but one of my favorite songs is I can't make you love me sung by Tank...in my head it get s mixed with John Lengend--Best you've ever had...then there's you...added another layer of melody! :)
2nd Dec 2013 8:07pm
Wow, what a freaking amazing compliment! That happens to be one of my fav. Songs too n yea, I wanna kiss u right now! lol thank u my sweet Nik... Appreciate u always :)
2nd Dec 2013 9:09pm
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2nd Dec 2013 3:19pm
A precious jewel this is, Poetic. Your heart sings a melody of pure adore. Love it ;)
2nd Dec 2013 8:13pm
Truth to tell my heart is always singing of love, needless to say the tendency to long for what one desires generally shows itself ... I thank u my sweet one, appreciate u a lot :)
2nd Dec 2013 8:58pm
2nd Dec 2013 9:49pm
Hey sweetheart! God it's been awhile since I last heard from u... So good to see your name on my page again though! I've missed u my friend, n I'm thankful for ur thoughts n support :)
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- Edited 3rd Dec 2013 2:33am
3rd Dec 2013 2:15am
Bro Poe, when did you begin writing tearjerkers man? for god sake have your one night and jump off the stern will ya..ya got all the ladies sniffling their support..you need me to bring you down to terra firma..lol excellent scribe my brother! I dig it
Lmao I'm sorry bro! can ya help out!? lol
Truly n always you give me big smiles
n jolts of inspiration with your continued support!
Greatly appreciate you, n peace n love I wish to you n yours :)
Truly n always you give me big smiles
n jolts of inspiration with your continued support!
Greatly appreciate you, n peace n love I wish to you n yours :)
3rd Dec 2013 6:29am
serene as heaven my boy.
loved ur passionate write man ...
I felt that way too....
write on..
cyanide...
loved ur passionate write man ...
I felt that way too....
write on..
cyanide...
3rd Dec 2013 11:50am
Thanks bro. it's great to know I haven't been alone in this 'state' lol truly n always appreciate your support kid :)
7th Dec 2013 00:40am
7th Dec 2013 4:45am
Aaaawww thank u sweetie, a reading? I may just do that :)
Appreciate ur support always :)
Appreciate ur support always :)
