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The Heat
Burn me, burn me.
Cremate and urn me.
I've exploded with lust,
And heaven has spurned me.
Fiery fingers have tantalized and torched me;
Palms like hot coals have scandalized and scorched me.
Spear me, sear me.
cook me well.
Burn me. Burn me.
Hot as hell.
Cremate and urn me.
I've exploded with lust,
And heaven has spurned me.
Fiery fingers have tantalized and torched me;
Palms like hot coals have scandalized and scorched me.
Spear me, sear me.
cook me well.
Burn me. Burn me.
Hot as hell.
Published 3rd Dec 2013
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Anonymous
3rd Dec 2013 00:32am
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3rd Dec 2013 2:09am
Thanks. I go for rhyme-y poems. They make an easier read with better flow in my opinion. And yes, I think Passion is FOR SURE fiery.
3rd Dec 2013 1:33am
The passion in which is expressed here is definitely very hott! nice work :)
3rd Dec 2013 2:11am
Thanks so much. Making things hot and steamy keeps it interesting...and rather enticing. ;)
3rd Dec 2013 2:51am
3rd Dec 2013 3:01am
Anonymous
3rd Dec 2013 3:34pm
m_abbott1999,
Damn! A BBQ at your place must be quite the culinary ordeal! ; ) Well done!
tornado
Damn! A BBQ at your place must be quite the culinary ordeal! ; ) Well done!
tornado
Anonymous
3rd Dec 2013 6:50pm
You express passion of which all seek and few find! Bravo!
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