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Demon Lover
Deviant kisses rain down on me
under a velveteen sky
you're luscious lips ripe with desire
pull me to the edge
crashing against your shores
I give into my need
entwining my body with yours
we become one
opening myself to you with abandon
you enter me roughly
wings unfurl as I take you in my secret places
my demon lover with dangerous eyes
seeing into my soul with each thrust
raping my being so wantonly
me open to your seed craves your every lash
I fall into the abyss that is you
ardently you take my breath away
feeding the flames
as you caress and then hit my
virgin garden
like a pro I take the pleasure with the pain
demon lover sating my every desire
with whips and chains
I am yours forever as you lay claim to me for eternity
under a velveteen sky
you're luscious lips ripe with desire
pull me to the edge
crashing against your shores
I give into my need
entwining my body with yours
we become one
opening myself to you with abandon
you enter me roughly
wings unfurl as I take you in my secret places
my demon lover with dangerous eyes
seeing into my soul with each thrust
raping my being so wantonly
me open to your seed craves your every lash
I fall into the abyss that is you
ardently you take my breath away
feeding the flames
as you caress and then hit my
virgin garden
like a pro I take the pleasure with the pain
demon lover sating my every desire
with whips and chains
I am yours forever as you lay claim to me for eternity
Published 19th Nov 2013
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19th Nov 2013 4:18pm
Fervent desire ignites when tasting his fire, much love the delicacy, that is your poetry, Crim :)
19th Nov 2013 4:34pm
19th Nov 2013 4:21pm
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SWEET WRITE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sir Lancelott
SWEET WRITE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sir Lancelott
19th Nov 2013 4:34pm
Anonymous
19th Nov 2013 4:41pm
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19th Nov 2013 4:44pm
Anonymous
19th Nov 2013 5:01pm
Crim,
How beautifully you have captured that moment of completely giving in to your desires! Loved your line:
"me open to your seed craves your every lash
I fall into the abyss that is you"
A very wanton write!
tornado
How beautifully you have captured that moment of completely giving in to your desires! Loved your line:
"me open to your seed craves your every lash
I fall into the abyss that is you"
A very wanton write!
tornado
19th Nov 2013 5:17pm
19th Nov 2013 7:15pm
dangerous eyes are always a temptation. you set a captivating scene in the whips & chains...
19th Nov 2013 11:08pm
thank you John.. yes I love those dangerous eyes and you have to love whips and chains lol :) much love Crim
19th Nov 2013 9:55pm
19th Nov 2013 11:08pm
20th Nov 2013 1:59am
with whips and chains
I am yours forever as you lay claim to me for eternity
great ending
brutal passion
well done
I am yours forever as you lay claim to me for eternity
great ending
brutal passion
well done
20th Nov 2013 3:29pm
20th Nov 2013 3:10am
"as you caress and then hit my
virgin garden" ...
Right on the edge of darkness and erotism...
and a little bit of lust... one of the most delicious poems...
virgin garden" ...
Right on the edge of darkness and erotism...
and a little bit of lust... one of the most delicious poems...
20th Nov 2013 3:30pm
Anonymous
20th Nov 2013 5:52am
Sensual write Brenda, I can feel your sweet surrender with each line.
20th Nov 2013 3:30pm
Anonymous
20th Nov 2013 6:40am
wow! such a powerfully gifting labor sweet Crim..I'm awed by the complete feeling of selfless sacrifice you intone here..love it m'lady ... :)
20th Nov 2013 3:31pm
20th Nov 2013 7:08am
"demon lover sating my every desire with whips and chains
I am yours forever as you lay claim to me for eternity"
love that! You're on fire Brenda, i'm just loving everything you write!
I am yours forever as you lay claim to me for eternity"
love that! You're on fire Brenda, i'm just loving everything you write!
20th Nov 2013 3:33pm
Mia lovely lady you touch my heart and make me smile wide with the love and kindness you show me.. I love the way you write and am humbled by your words.. much love Brenda :)
20th Nov 2013 4:50pm
Crimsin,
You have captured all aspects of one’s emotion in this write. A dark, sensual and beautiful write. Roll on girl with ya bad ass!!!
You have captured all aspects of one’s emotion in this write. A dark, sensual and beautiful write. Roll on girl with ya bad ass!!!
20th Nov 2013 4:58pm
Anonymous
16th Jun 2018 9:59pm
So erotic and beautifully expressed. Well done
17th Jun 2018 2:18pm
