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Said The Sun To The Moon
The sun longed
for the cool embrace
of the bejeweled moon
though he would
shy away from her
scorching embrace
she loved his
rough edges and swagger
lusting for him throughout the day
eagerly awaiting the moment
when they would be as one in the sky
her heart raced at just the thought of him
her curvaceous sizzling figure
dressed in her best golden gown
she wished to impress him
desiring him with all her heart
finally he with his sexy voice
so sensual spoke to her
lovely one you sparkle and shine
I've been wanting you for an eternity now
though i'm afraid of getting burned
I've been hurt though
I carry a tough guy persona
with all my swagger
there's a tender heart underneath
kiss me sweet lady I've been gazing
at you for forever
watching you warm the Earth
tenderly seeing to the crops
feeding the humans with your giving rays
lay with me awhile as the tides roll in
let's make love while one in the sky
the moon and sun fell for each other hard
one cold the other scorching
worlds collided that day
as a new star was born
for the cool embrace
of the bejeweled moon
though he would
shy away from her
scorching embrace
she loved his
rough edges and swagger
lusting for him throughout the day
eagerly awaiting the moment
when they would be as one in the sky
her heart raced at just the thought of him
her curvaceous sizzling figure
dressed in her best golden gown
she wished to impress him
desiring him with all her heart
finally he with his sexy voice
so sensual spoke to her
lovely one you sparkle and shine
I've been wanting you for an eternity now
though i'm afraid of getting burned
I've been hurt though
I carry a tough guy persona
with all my swagger
there's a tender heart underneath
kiss me sweet lady I've been gazing
at you for forever
watching you warm the Earth
tenderly seeing to the crops
feeding the humans with your giving rays
lay with me awhile as the tides roll in
let's make love while one in the sky
the moon and sun fell for each other hard
one cold the other scorching
worlds collided that day
as a new star was born
Published 18th Nov 2013
| Edited 19th Nov 2013
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18th Nov 2013 8:52pm
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18th Nov 2013 9:33pm
WOW! Felt like I was sitting on the couch in the living room, listening to a conversation between the sun and moon. I saw and heard this ink clearly. Beautifully done! Xo
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18th Nov 2013 9:46pm
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18th Nov 2013 10:39pm
thank you Gabriel you made me smile wide with your lovely comment :) peace Crim
18th Nov 2013 9:49pm
Gorgeous write sweets!!!
Your pen loves you!!
Beautiful read luv!!
Sir Lancelott
Your pen loves you!!
Beautiful read luv!!
Sir Lancelott
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Anonymous
19th Nov 2013 1:10am
Oh, you little romantic you... what tender and touching lines you've written. I love this.
19th Nov 2013 1:37am
thank you Petit I guess I am a romantic at heart though I hide her at times :) much love Crim
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19th Nov 2013 1:55am
I love the dualities in your voice(s). This perfectly encapsulates your complexities.
Sun & Moon...the opposition can produce a beautifully passionate explosion.
Methinks there could be a full-blown romantic lurking beneath all that battle-scarred chain mail....
Sun & Moon...the opposition can produce a beautifully passionate explosion.
Methinks there could be a full-blown romantic lurking beneath all that battle-scarred chain mail....
19th Nov 2013 2:08pm
thank you Butcher for such a lovely comment yes lol there is a romantic here under the battle scarred chain mail.. loved that thank you :) peace Crim
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19th Nov 2013 2:34pm
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19th Nov 2013 2:38pm
Thank you Mr. A for enjoying my story.. you put a smile on my face :) much love Crim
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