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Ice rain
Pass me a cigarette
and we’ll stand out in the undercover car park
and watch the hail beat the ground
like it wants to settle a score
There’s a girl by the vending machine
crying on the phone
and a guy with a camera lens
skimming the ground
telling me he’s looking for the best light
to capture the fists of ice
that have missed the roofing smashing them
into ice cube pieces
The air is on edge with human anxiety
phone calls and panic over parked cars
that might be driving home
without their windshields tonight
And I want to kiss the rain
for making me feel alive
on this day that’s been passing with less glory
than a day of getting older should
because a part of me ought to feel proud
I’ve made it to this number alive
I’ve been walking around
all dead on the inside
and you’d never know
if I didn’t tell you
So close your lips
and don’t ask me how I’ve been
just pass me a cigarette
and we’ll smoke in silence
watching the hail beat the ground
like it wants to settle a score
Storms always make me feel alive
© Indie Adams 2013
and we’ll stand out in the undercover car park
and watch the hail beat the ground
like it wants to settle a score
There’s a girl by the vending machine
crying on the phone
and a guy with a camera lens
skimming the ground
telling me he’s looking for the best light
to capture the fists of ice
that have missed the roofing smashing them
into ice cube pieces
The air is on edge with human anxiety
phone calls and panic over parked cars
that might be driving home
without their windshields tonight
And I want to kiss the rain
for making me feel alive
on this day that’s been passing with less glory
than a day of getting older should
because a part of me ought to feel proud
I’ve made it to this number alive
I’ve been walking around
all dead on the inside
and you’d never know
if I didn’t tell you
So close your lips
and don’t ask me how I’ve been
just pass me a cigarette
and we’ll smoke in silence
watching the hail beat the ground
like it wants to settle a score
Storms always make me feel alive
© Indie Adams 2013
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