Synergy

explosive sensual energy in this sexy poem Red!!! peace Crim :)

Thank you doll glad you enjoyed it!!!

Red

Beautiful! Psst, fix the typo in the title... kick-ass word, by the way.

Thanks A!!! Good looking out! Lol

Red

Isn't it synergy? The title about the photo spells it incorrectly whereas the photo does not. Anyway,your words (in a dark, sexy way) are so poetically balanced. Your syntax is well-structured and I loved the rhyme scheme. The poem as a whole is well-structured. Well done GR, as always.

Thank you so much SW your critique is very insightful thank again I a appreciate the feedback and the compliment.

Red

Now this is something worth reading and looking at several times. I love the way you depict the basic wants that don't usually get met. Red, sensuous and sexy, while to the point.

Hahaha thanks Grace you are the coolest chick at DUP, don't let anyone say otherwise!!! Muahsss


Red

Oh, woman... this is the you I love to read. Strong - almost primordial - earthy and sexy as hell...

Lol woo hoo!!!! How about that, thanks Petit!!

Red

Rolls right of the tongue in such a tasty manner-Beautiful Write Dear Red!!!

Thank you Soul, you just know how to flatter a gal!!!

Red

....such a surgeon with a pen, you operate with perfect clarity, delivering a flawless message that leaves many in recovery from the expression of your ink. Xo (message received)

Queen Rain, nothing delights me more than knowing you enjoy my work thank you for always supporting me so generously!

Red