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Freedom in chains
A serenity,a calmness
settles in my heart
my mind at ease
my body sated
my eyes weep a melodic
sweet refrain
that echo's down the wind
and reaches You
on a whisper
No tears of sadness here
for You give me freedom...
in chains
settles in my heart
my mind at ease
my body sated
my eyes weep a melodic
sweet refrain
that echo's down the wind
and reaches You
on a whisper
No tears of sadness here
for You give me freedom...
in chains
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Re: Freedom in chains
Anonymous
14th Nov 2013 2:09pm
Lovely, serene surrender..beautiful imagery!
Great write softtoy!
~Tom
Great write softtoy!
~Tom
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re: Re: Freedom in chains
14th Nov 2013 2:25pm
Re: Freedom in chains
14th Nov 2013 5:59pm
Oh beautiful piece this
One lucky man you have
To be spoken of like this in your poetry
One lucky man you have
To be spoken of like this in your poetry
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re: Re: Freedom in chains
14th Nov 2013 8:55pm
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Re: Freedom in chains
20th Nov 2013 7:52pm
a submissive knowing the joy of her gift to Master.
sweet salvation
beautiful writing
soft edges
loved it
sweet salvation
beautiful writing
soft edges
loved it
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re: Re: Freedom in chains
21st Nov 2013 11:27am