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Do I Love You Any Less ?
“....What you won't do
do for love
You'll try everything
but you won't give up
In my world, only you
make me do for love
what I would not do.....” Bobby Caldwell
Stealthily
I enter her kitchen
The warm incandescent glow
of the light overhead
hazy waves of an ever building heat
and this woman, the finest I've ever seen
bent over a steamy, hot sink
Cowboy Tee, no panties
So damned sexy until it's obscene
the heat
making beads of sweat
stream down our faces......
I step out of my boxers,
long, thick and hard
an image that erases
any traces of
what's to cum next
I press her soft, wet body hard against the sink
shirt raised above her brazen hips
my rock poised to take a long drink
from her creamy, wet yoni...
oh how her passion drips
(…...she's a rainmaker, she makes the rain fall from the clouds)
Motion,
emotions
every rich, thick
inch of it
Every long, languished stroke,
I'm up on my toes.....
.......balls deep
Every powerful thrust lifts
her body from the floor
We burn inside this lustful inferno,
sex sounds lush and wet
flesh slappin', nipples hard
breast splashin'
against warm water, deep
grinding my body in locked rhythm
against my baby
her hips dance seductively
seeking a hot, soulful release.........
…....do I love you any less?
Words unspoken
moans and hisses
gentle whispers and
torrid hot kisses
firmly squeezing
devilishly teasing
her tingling flesh
in the midst of a
potent, hot mix
your hips are rolling deep
on the tip of this man's dick
hard, throbbing and thick.......
a delicious violation
satisfying your insatiable elation
your pussy feeling the sweetest sensation
….....the most mind bending release
the stirring of your hedonistic lust-filled brew
at the hands of your own
personal
savage
beast
Do I love you any less?
Are we making love?
Are we just having sex?
As we lay upon the floor
in a crumpled heap,
were the whispers of my emotions
to your ears any less true? Any less deep?
Did not my heart still speak of
my endless love for you?
And for you I'd give my soul
My arms wrapped around you tight
and I'm right here when the darkness
gives way to the morning light....
Does the passion in my kisses
feel any different than before ?
Is it wrong for my desires to burn like fire
and of this strong drink of coffee,
do your lips long for more?
In our private moments.....no one else around
you're my bitch
and I'm your whore
torridly fucking each other into madness
friction burns upon the kitchen floor......
…....do I love you any less?
Published 12th Nov 2013
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Anonymous
12th Nov 2013 6:31pm
MrM,
Doing the dishes his way! Yes Sir!!! Loved these lines:
"and this woman, the finest I've ever seen
bent over a steamy, hot sink
Cowboy Tee, no panties
So Damned sexy until it's obscene"
What an erotic visual!
tornado
Doing the dishes his way! Yes Sir!!! Loved these lines:
"and this woman, the finest I've ever seen
bent over a steamy, hot sink
Cowboy Tee, no panties
So Damned sexy until it's obscene"
What an erotic visual!
tornado
thank you bruh T. Sparked by this notion that having sex and making love are intrinsically different or that "tearing it up" is somehow far removed from "sensual and seductive" That the end result of deep, fiery, sexual, sensual desires somehow negate the presence or absence of love. Understanding that there are differences by degree...matter of choice, I guess. Just addressing this in a uniquely, Musically Mr M kinda' way.
btw.......that kitchen thang is a most favorite fantasy. >:-)
btw.......that kitchen thang is a most favorite fantasy. >:-)
Anonymous
12th Nov 2013 7:04pm
....no better place to explore the differences in degrees than the kitchen! ; ) All those knobs to twist and levers to pull....Swing open that big oven door, crank up the heat and do some shaking and baking! Perfectly addressed.... ; )
12th Nov 2013 7:06pm
Anonymous
12th Nov 2013 6:47pm
This was ssoooo steamy
Enjoyed it very much....
Kitty
Enjoyed it very much....
Kitty
12th Nov 2013 7:01pm
Thanks Kitty : ) ??? Do you think that there is a real difference in "making love" and "having unadulterated sex" in popular vernacular even though a real and true love exist in both scenarios?
12th Nov 2013 8:18pm
Making love to the one you love and having sex with someone is totally different. Being in love, having desire, passion and yearning for the individual is making love because of the emotions tied to the act. Sex is going through the motions with a climax being the end result. No one should love their special someone any less when it's combined. Rough, raw, nasty straight fuckin = making love when you love the person. Just my two cents. :) Love this, especially the kitchen scene and cowboy t-shirt with no panties....;) Xoxo
12th Nov 2013 8:26pm
Very well put....the emotional connection in my oppinion should make the difference regardless of the intensity of the action. Someone told me in a group conversation that love or not, there is a difference, let's say, in rough sex and sensual loving......I disagree
12th Nov 2013 9:33pm
Love leads to loving, making love and sex. These are ingredients of an accepting relationship where couples do together things they want to do. Kitchen table, sink, floor fantasies are shared in every minds, not lived out by many...MrM, you say it best in the poem.:)
12th Nov 2013 9:56pm
".....Love leads to loving, making love and sex. These are ingredients of an accepting relationship where couples do together things they want to do. Kitchen table, sink, floor fantasies are shared in every minds, not lived out by many..."
I co-sign completely : )
I co-sign completely : )
14th Nov 2013 4:19pm
12th Nov 2013 10:59pm
Lovely, sexy, sensual...and much more...Your words have a way of caressing the mind, body and soul.
Cowboy Tee, no panties
Her hips dance seductively
Seeking a hot, soulful release.........
Nicely put together, I enjoyed immensely!
Cowboy Tee, no panties
Her hips dance seductively
Seeking a hot, soulful release.........
Nicely put together, I enjoyed immensely!
19th Nov 2013 9:53pm
Woah...hot hot hot, agree you can be in love and have the best dirty time, cant wait to do the dishes;)
