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Watching
Retreating to the shadows
Watching from somewhat "afar"
Creeping in this little space
Watching this curious place
I have not much to say
At least not today
The silence is deafening
A roaring in my ears
Like there's so much to express
But they were lost in a few tears
Or hidden behind a tired smile
Content to rest for awhile
The silence is maddening
Like imagining footsteps in a hall
From a room where you were alone
Or at least you thought
But the musings stay locked up
Unable to escape for now
If I should die before they wake
I'll carry them with me into the ground
Meanwhile,
Just know...
I'm always watching
Watching from somewhat "afar"
Creeping in this little space
Watching this curious place
I have not much to say
At least not today
The silence is deafening
A roaring in my ears
Like there's so much to express
But they were lost in a few tears
Or hidden behind a tired smile
Content to rest for awhile
The silence is maddening
Like imagining footsteps in a hall
From a room where you were alone
Or at least you thought
But the musings stay locked up
Unable to escape for now
If I should die before they wake
I'll carry them with me into the ground
Meanwhile,
Just know...
I'm always watching
Published 12th Nov 2013
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12th Nov 2013 4:52pm
I wrote this about DUP lol.... I haven't been as active as usual lately... But I'm watching... Always watching :P
12th Nov 2013 11:34am
12th Nov 2013 4:53pm
Anonymous
12th Nov 2013 1:40pm
Miss Kitty its good! ..and good to know more than one of us has these days. I wrote a piece very similar a couple years back when I was feeling particularly detached, just enough to say we're still interested.
Love it KFH..:)
Love it KFH..:)
12th Nov 2013 5:01pm
Anonymous
12th Nov 2013 2:02pm
That is why you call yourself Kitty....
Cats watch................
and wait..................
good poem
Kitty the Elder
Cats watch................
and wait..................
good poem
Kitty the Elder
12th Nov 2013 5:00pm
Meow =^.^=
Yes they do... I've woken up before with a certain kitten sitting on my chest, staring at me, and patting me on the the face with her little paw. No tellin how long she'd been sitting there.
Thanks for stopping by! :)
Yes they do... I've woken up before with a certain kitten sitting on my chest, staring at me, and patting me on the the face with her little paw. No tellin how long she'd been sitting there.
Thanks for stopping by! :)
12th Nov 2013 5:14pm
I understand the need to just sit back and watch.. great inking Kitty :) peace Crim
12th Nov 2013 8:45pm
Kitty, your ink shows that age is clearly just a number. You write with such grace and maturity. Wise beyond your years babydoll....Xo
Anonymous
15th Nov 2013 4:49am
Love it, dark and chilling and if its about dup, you were point on :))
