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A complex state of dreaming (Cinquain)
Life
an illusion
a complex state of dreaming
overwhelming until death
sleeping
Published 20th Jan 2011
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Anonymous
20th Jan 2011 1:54am
This is a dark and beautiful cinquain, compressing a lifetime of pain and confusion into five short lines.
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