The proposition

Beautifully done Red...

Strider

Thank you Strider. :-)


Red

Hot write, dear Red.

Grace thank you for stopping by to read and comment.

Red

You could've written 50 Shades of Grey...beautiful imagery and lovely, sensual, write. Well done!

Wow that's a great compliment, thank so much!

Red

Check this one out SW see how you like it. lol

http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/111885-out-of-sight/

The narrative is addictive. My only struggle here is that with the switch in verb tenses and the quotations, I got lost a couple of times.
Did make me regret sticking to the instruments and not learning much in terms of how to dance.

Lol sorry Jazzy, I love dancing it is one of my passions next to music and reading. :-) Thanks for reading.


Red

Red, you are so gifted with your craft of poetry. Your erotica has so much passion and sensuality to it! Beautiful proposition my dear! Xo

My lovely Rain, the best part is that all of my erotica has a lot of my life in it, experiences and adventures :)Thank you sweet one!

Red

Indeed "Some nights are perfect for the most unbecoming yet sensual propositions" -These are where contented sighs come from- Beautiful Write Dear Red!!!

Indeed my wonderful Soul, sigh worthy to say the least!Thank you so much my friend, stay tuned, this is one of a series of 3 poems along the same lines!

Red

Indeed eyes peeled!!! :)

Sounds like indecent proposal to me...whew it's so hot my friend! Never experienced it in a car though. In my younger days, we don't have cars back home, just a calesa and sled (LOL)! I freaking love it!!!

Well hell Vic that's one for the bucket list try it you might like it lol It is fun, its one of those things that makes you feel young and naughty again! lol Thank you love.

Red

Think the proposition answer is delcious!!  Good write and visual!

Thank you Nik, glad you liked it!

Red

Your inspiration is infectious......


I never Tangoed in the car or screwed a woman on the bar
But yes it happened once or twice and have to say that it was nice
Where a beauty that I met by chance ended in a better dance.

It's fun to be naughty and wild life is too short not to go with an urge every now and then. Lol

Thanks PS glad you enjoyed this piece!

Red

Spoken like the Queen of naughty.....

:-)

irl this sizzles and moves just like a salsa dance



love it


Fire

Hey my sis, thank you glad you liked it so happy to see around these parts!

Red

exquisite!

Why thank you Raven, I am please you found it so!


Red