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The Union
I'm with you Padre
don't let go
sometimes I start to slip
that's when I feel
your grip...
tighten up,
holding on to me
never letting go
don't let me fall,
I'm with you Padre.
don't let go
sometimes I start to slip
that's when I feel
your grip...
tighten up,
holding on to me
never letting go
don't let me fall,
I'm with you Padre.
Published 23rd Sep 2013
| Edited 4th Nov 2018
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Anonymous
23rd Sep 2013 2:56pm
powerful, clever..much enjoyed this piece, hashman :-) write on
23rd Sep 2013 3:01pm
Thank you mikimoondancer...i feel your soul,you are beautiful :)...listening to a little steve miller live at rockpalast 1983...i know you will like it...peace :)
23rd Sep 2013 3:28pm
Anonymous
23rd Sep 2013 3:03pm
and that's how friendships should be! Nice scribe Mr. Hash :)
23rd Sep 2013 3:28pm
23rd Sep 2013 4:39pm
To have something or someone to hold on too...points to ponder, Hashman. Good read.
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Anonymous
24th Sep 2013 1:22am
Concise but complete
Nice write!
Kitty
Nice write!
Kitty
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Anonymous
24th Sep 2013 2:07am
Wonderful when you know that you have someone to keep you safe...
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