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Breaking veil
Breaking veil
Smoke pillows thick
across the valley fog
miles in mist
the echoes thrall
chanting's
incantations
murmurs and candle drippings
the cloaked broke open the path
where those that Never were
and shall be again, rise
beside the cemetery lines
skeletal fingers dig through
mossed hunks of overgrowth
while above whips the vampyr bat
flying to ward howl and moon
id est quod est, Nosferatu
ink twists swirl, unfurl unending
witching hour held, kept
gone forever dawns promise
ghouls slip amid goblins
screech harvest beside growling
as night pale riders
beat hooves from the blackness
Woman man dog child
huddle close hearth and fire
leaves curl crisp in bitterness
feeding essence of stale and decrepit
bemoan thou man for shadows fall
the ticking has failed
tick
tock
marked only in pumping throb
lumps catch
in errs long dissonance
hollowed empty
savor sufferer
lost silent screams
scratch white streaks
clawed open, torn
upon the back
reach out from your gloom
as pain rips shards
slit deep the hidden moon
pulling with might
where force compounds malice
envelope and consumes
ever night's presence
locking
with link and chain
dragging the helpless
wherein the Never, shall
freely reign
Smoke pillows thick
across the valley fog
miles in mist
the echoes thrall
chanting's
incantations
murmurs and candle drippings
the cloaked broke open the path
where those that Never were
and shall be again, rise
beside the cemetery lines
skeletal fingers dig through
mossed hunks of overgrowth
while above whips the vampyr bat
flying to ward howl and moon
id est quod est, Nosferatu
ink twists swirl, unfurl unending
witching hour held, kept
gone forever dawns promise
ghouls slip amid goblins
screech harvest beside growling
as night pale riders
beat hooves from the blackness
Woman man dog child
huddle close hearth and fire
leaves curl crisp in bitterness
feeding essence of stale and decrepit
bemoan thou man for shadows fall
the ticking has failed
tick
tock
marked only in pumping throb
lumps catch
in errs long dissonance
hollowed empty
savor sufferer
lost silent screams
scratch white streaks
clawed open, torn
upon the back
reach out from your gloom
as pain rips shards
slit deep the hidden moon
pulling with might
where force compounds malice
envelope and consumes
ever night's presence
locking
with link and chain
dragging the helpless
wherein the Never, shall
freely reign
Published 16th Sep 2013
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16th Sep 2013 4:22am
16th Sep 2013 4:29am
An imagery that conjures up deep fear of the unknown, the between-worlds where ancient horrors dwell. Brr..good read Soul. Good Luck in the Comp.
16th Sep 2013 4:34am
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17th Sep 2013 00:44am
I had on my scary face when I wrote it...lots of brooding and eyebrow raising;)
One must stay quiet in such places--YOU are too Kind Thank You Dear Mae:)))
One must stay quiet in such places--YOU are too Kind Thank You Dear Mae:)))
Anonymous
16th Sep 2013 8:23am
This poem is very much the dark forces, the dark luring itself in when autumn comes and the shadows get thicker....great tale, Soul!
17th Sep 2013 00:48am
I Love this time of year Dear Queen, and spookiness adds to the thrill of it eh? :) Thank You so much:)))
16th Sep 2013 9:35am
"Breaking the veil" indeed. This reached every dark enchanting place. Some parts reminded me of my world.
A most excellent write Soul. All the best in the comp. :)
A most excellent write Soul. All the best in the comp. :)
17th Sep 2013 00:52am
I thought I recognized You around that fire chanting away ;) Thank You so Much Dear Magdalena :)))
16th Sep 2013 9:57am
You have provided characteristics of just about every gruesome monster of my childhood, starting with Abiyoyo and Beowulf and ending with Glaurung and the Kracken.
Adventure on!
Adventure on!
17th Sep 2013 00:55am
The joy of such things Jazz...I think the kids we are we will always be eh?Despite the mean ol' mirror!!!
Thank You Buddy!!!
Thank You Buddy!!!
Anonymous
16th Sep 2013 10:42am
Great write Mr soul...a bit different for you!
Good luck.
Strider
Good luck.
Strider
17th Sep 2013 00:56am
Thanks a lot Strider!!!
I need to push from time to time out of my comfort zone...trying Sir.- Thank You!!!
I need to push from time to time out of my comfort zone...trying Sir.- Thank You!!!
16th Sep 2013 12:10pm
Soul my man,
If I were those judges. You would be the winner.
cool as fuk poem man.
well thought out and very well written.
KG
If I were those judges. You would be the winner.
cool as fuk poem man.
well thought out and very well written.
KG
17th Sep 2013 00:58am
Too Kind You are KG :)
I thank You very much Sir, glad You enjoyed this venture:)))
I thank You very much Sir, glad You enjoyed this venture:)))
17th Sep 2013 3:14am
love this....
simply ghoulish and riveting
I actually feel like this some days
Fire
simply ghoulish and riveting
I actually feel like this some days
Fire
17th Sep 2013 3:35am
17th Sep 2013 6:25am
Soul damn you are a great writer.. I really dug this dark journey thank you.. peace Crim
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17th Sep 2013 4:20pm
Ahhhh there She is back out and about;) Thank You Dear Red Great to see You!!!
17th Sep 2013 5:08pm
Yes thank you Soul, down but not out, tarnished, dimmed and dented but I am here..
Red
Red
17th Sep 2013 6:33pm
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21st Sep 2013 2:16am
well...I was going to call it hollow-weenie and put it in the erotic category but then I feared being burned at the stake-Thanks for dropping By John!!!
Anonymous
28th Sep 2013 7:50pm
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28th Sep 2013 8:48pm
Thank You Michael Much appreciated.
You picked one im not too fond of lol
it's a bit cornier than my usual cornball self :D
Thank You for stopping by!!!
You picked one im not too fond of lol
it's a bit cornier than my usual cornball self :D
Thank You for stopping by!!!
