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A ravishing beauty
Ravishing beauty she is
My brother’s love
Eyes of deep brown
Lips of blush corals
Hair of ebony
Voice like whispers
Of rain on bamboo groves
Aphrodite personified….
A girl seen through
the eyes of love
To me just a curvaceous girl
With no dandruff.
My brother’s love
Eyes of deep brown
Lips of blush corals
Hair of ebony
Voice like whispers
Of rain on bamboo groves
Aphrodite personified….
A girl seen through
the eyes of love
To me just a curvaceous girl
With no dandruff.
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13th Aug 2013 1:32am
Re: A ravishing beauty
Anonymous
13th Aug 2013 1:49am
lovely little love tribute grace....good luck strider
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13th Aug 2013 9:58am
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Anonymous
13th Aug 2013 2:54pm
Love seen through a lover's eyes
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To me just a curvaceous girl
With no dandruff
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good insight
well written
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To me just a curvaceous girl
With no dandruff
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good insight
well written
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15th Aug 2013 5:46am
Always like that dear kitty, everything is perfect in the eyes of love... thanks dear.
Re: A ravishing beauty
13th Aug 2013 3:44pm
LOL yeah the boys see one thing and we see another lol nicely penned.
Red
Red
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15th Aug 2013 5:50am
Re: A ravishing beauty
14th Aug 2013 2:13pm
Hehe-And eyes see with Heart/ or just the mind...some are fortunate to see with both-rare these things!!!
Wonderful Write Dear Grace!!!
Good luck in the comp.!!!
Wonderful Write Dear Grace!!!
Good luck in the comp.!!!
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15th Aug 2013 5:54am
Re: A ravishing beauty
15th Aug 2013 5:11am
Ahhh to read your lovely poems again.
This was beautiful. Yes to be seen through the eyes of love is a wonderful thing indeed.
Good luck!
much love
G
This was beautiful. Yes to be seen through the eyes of love is a wonderful thing indeed.
Good luck!
much love
G
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