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My sweet escape.
Depression I have this obsession
With death
Call it a death wish ,
Or the I wish I was dead list
Not strong enough to take my own life
So I dream of it
Will I see God , or is Satan going to be greeting me at the gates?
Everyone dies so why can’t I?
I hate my fucking life anyway
Daddy hates me, School discourages me, Mom never notices me
Society fucks me every time
This world sucks, Since you left
Hey, there’s my strength
Nobody will miss me anyway
Take this bottle of pills,
Now here’s a nightmare I’ll never wake up from
Cause of death: Suicide Young teen aprox:16 Time of death aprox 3:00 am
With death
Call it a death wish ,
Or the I wish I was dead list
Not strong enough to take my own life
So I dream of it
Will I see God , or is Satan going to be greeting me at the gates?
Everyone dies so why can’t I?
I hate my fucking life anyway
Daddy hates me, School discourages me, Mom never notices me
Society fucks me every time
This world sucks, Since you left
Hey, there’s my strength
Nobody will miss me anyway
Take this bottle of pills,
Now here’s a nightmare I’ll never wake up from
Cause of death: Suicide Young teen aprox:16 Time of death aprox 3:00 am
Published 7th Aug 2013
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7th Aug 2013 11:53pm
Wow! You've expressed it and I feel it. How hard it must be for you. I'm glad you're reaching out with this poem. I was 16 a while ago and I remember how hard it was at times. I also look at my own life and am amazed at how I am doing things now that i could never have imagined I could do. My message: There is hope. Don't give up. Find strength. Find one person you can talk to. By happenstance I posted a poem right after yours, Rebuilding Trust. What do you think of it?
8th Aug 2013 00:09am
8th Aug 2013 00:08am
Wow B.S.O.P! This poem was very honest and dark, (but this is how you feel.
I can tell you that I have felt the same way and have contemplated the same thing.
For a while, Papa Roach's, "Last Resort," was my
favorite song that I could feel/relate to.
All that I can say is that I have been where you are and know what you are feeling.
Just hang in there and as incredibly hard as it is right now, it will pass if you allow it to.
Your poem is very concise, impacting and intelligently written so, you have a lot to offer the world.
Be strong and try to think positive thoughts.
Good write B.S.O.P... Pan
Blessed Be!
I can tell you that I have felt the same way and have contemplated the same thing.
For a while, Papa Roach's, "Last Resort," was my
favorite song that I could feel/relate to.
All that I can say is that I have been where you are and know what you are feeling.
Just hang in there and as incredibly hard as it is right now, it will pass if you allow it to.
Your poem is very concise, impacting and intelligently written so, you have a lot to offer the world.
Be strong and try to think positive thoughts.
Good write B.S.O.P... Pan
Blessed Be!
9th Aug 2013 11:48pm
