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Can't seem to get next to you...
As mustered courage advances
A spotted treasure, heart dances
her beauty captures and entrances...
In mind's eye
Provoking, the mental images
I die at the thought:
'passion scrimmages'
tasting someone so heavenly
embracing her supple frame
bound within my arms can't she see...
A need for her heart, mind, n' body
so quick, come set me free
take me to the edge of ecstasy
fulfill this repetituous fantasy
baby please, come get next to me...
A spotted treasure, heart dances
her beauty captures and entrances...
In mind's eye
Provoking, the mental images
I die at the thought:
'passion scrimmages'
tasting someone so heavenly
embracing her supple frame
bound within my arms can't she see...
A need for her heart, mind, n' body
so quick, come set me free
take me to the edge of ecstasy
fulfill this repetituous fantasy
baby please, come get next to me...
Published 7th Aug 2013
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Anonymous
7th Aug 2013 8:11pm
Very lyrical...me likey:)
7th Aug 2013 8:23pm
That's wonderful becuz I likey you my sweetheart! :) n I truly appreciate you much :)
7th Aug 2013 8:31pm
Oh yes ... tension is building as well as passion. Who wouldn't get next to someone expressing himself so bodily and emotionally? Fantastic write, dear.
Chi
Chi
7th Aug 2013 8:38pm
Aaaaawwww how sweet of you to say that?
Thank you for pasting a big cheesy smile on my mug! lol
Appreciate u so much my friend :)
Thank you for pasting a big cheesy smile on my mug! lol
Appreciate u so much my friend :)
7th Aug 2013 9:09pm
I told you as soon as I dump my husband, you could! o_O jk
Dude, like really? With this ink, you could get next to her, on top of her, inside of her, etc...etc...
Seriously, a lovely scribe! Xo
Dude, like really? With this ink, you could get next to her, on top of her, inside of her, etc...etc...
Seriously, a lovely scribe! Xo
7th Aug 2013 9:26pm
Oh damn that's right my bad, frigging
'Ole timer's disease messin wit my memory! lol
But yea? Think I could? Uhm would u write me a letter of recommendation!? lol thank u my sweet beauty... Always
I appreciate n adore u :)
'Ole timer's disease messin wit my memory! lol
But yea? Think I could? Uhm would u write me a letter of recommendation!? lol thank u my sweet beauty... Always
I appreciate n adore u :)
Anonymous
7th Aug 2013 10:10pm
I can almost hear the music. Beautiful love song, cher.
7th Aug 2013 10:13pm
Aaaawwww thank u my dear! This comment is so sweet n I truly appreciate it :)
Anonymous
8th Aug 2013 3:19am
Oh I will be right there. Just stopping to pick up wine. LOL!!! Very romantic! :)
8th Aug 2013 3:25am
Lol ok, but make it beer! I'm not big on wine lol
thanks a ton my friend, greatly appreciate ur support always :)
thanks a ton my friend, greatly appreciate ur support always :)
8th Aug 2013 10:04am
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8th Aug 2013 2:49pm
Well hurry! N bring some chicken n beer! I'm starving! Lol
Thank u sweetness truly grateful for the smile n continued support of my ink :)
Thank u sweetness truly grateful for the smile n continued support of my ink :)
8th Aug 2013 6:17pm
You stupid, you know that?! hahaha I will MAKE you the fried chicken, you buy the beer, Merlot for me! hahahaha muaahhsss!
Red
Red
9th Aug 2013 3:26am
Yea I been called alot of things I. My life but never late for dinner lol... Okie u cook n I'll get u the Merlot but don't expect
vintage! I can only afford the 'middle' shelf stuff! lol
vintage! I can only afford the 'middle' shelf stuff! lol
Anonymous
8th Aug 2013 6:53pm
Nice scribe man, really enjoyed it.
9th Aug 2013 3:28am
Anonymous
8th Aug 2013 10:14pm
Beautiful write, Poetikmind. Some great lines, including this... "take me to the edge of ecstasy." Great work. Great read. :-)
*Peace* Carlene
*Peace* Carlene
9th Aug 2013 3:30am
