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'Dine-Her'
Stripped bare, with confident air
She saunters by me slowly
Her curvaceous body...
"oh holy!"
A look of mischievous thoughts
betrayed through her steamy eyes...
Into the kitchen, she beckons
I follow
anticipation building into need,
I swallow...
Onto the countertop,
she climbs ass propped
Baby salaciously n' seductively
rubs her tempestuous desire
my burn begins to swell,
causing a molten fire...
Instantly, her sweet honey appears
Steeled, my urgency draws me ever near
Hunger, now full grown from the seed
As she begs,
"lover, cum inside me after you feed..."
She saunters by me slowly
Her curvaceous body...
"oh holy!"
A look of mischievous thoughts
betrayed through her steamy eyes...
Into the kitchen, she beckons
I follow
anticipation building into need,
I swallow...
Onto the countertop,
she climbs ass propped
Baby salaciously n' seductively
rubs her tempestuous desire
my burn begins to swell,
causing a molten fire...
Instantly, her sweet honey appears
Steeled, my urgency draws me ever near
Hunger, now full grown from the seed
As she begs,
"lover, cum inside me after you feed..."
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6th Aug 2013 12:39pm
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6th Aug 2013 1:14pm
With the kitchen szenario you bring my blood to a boil, Mr. P. Hot write, indeed! Like it!
Chi
Chi
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6th Aug 2013 2:16pm
Mmmmmm let's boil together then! lol
Thank u sweetness, always i appreciate your
visits to my pages :)
Thank u sweetness, always i appreciate your
visits to my pages :)
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Anonymous
6th Aug 2013 2:44pm
Oh what a great read so early in the morning. Got my day started. Mmmmmm!!!! :)
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6th Aug 2013 4:07pm
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6th Aug 2013 3:34pm
Tsk,tsk,tsk naughty boy! you trying to get the gals riled up again? lol
Red
Red
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6th Aug 2013 4:14pm
Told u before, I'm innocent, as the day is long lol
Thank u for the laugh n support always my dear one :)
Thank u for the laugh n support always my dear one :)
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6th Aug 2013 7:53pm
Such a sexy way to dine-her; and it's free too?!
A fulfilling dinner and without the hassle of washing dishes either. ;)
Gotta' clean that countertop though...hehe
A fulfilling dinner and without the hassle of washing dishes either. ;)
Gotta' clean that countertop though...hehe
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7th Aug 2013 5:31am
Lol yup it's free! N I'm a 'Suckher' for a free meal! lol
So happy u enjoyed my sweet hotness, u rock lady! oh m yea I clean that counter good lol
So happy u enjoyed my sweet hotness, u rock lady! oh m yea I clean that counter good lol
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Anonymous
6th Aug 2013 11:12pm
Poetikmind,
....they say the way to a man's hard is thru the kitchen! LOL!!! Even nicer when all the ingredients are already laid out on the counter top ; ) Enjoyed!
tornado
....they say the way to a man's hard is thru the kitchen! LOL!!! Even nicer when all the ingredients are already laid out on the counter top ; ) Enjoyed!
tornado
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7th Aug 2013 5:34am
Hey you know it dude! lol n yea we must always
keep our ingredients at the ready! lol thanks n I appreciate ur time n thoughts my man :)
keep our ingredients at the ready! lol thanks n I appreciate ur time n thoughts my man :)
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Anonymous
7th Aug 2013 00:40am
Holy Moley....you can draw and write luscious erotic poetry....wonderful
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7th Aug 2013 5:36am
Aaaaawwww how sweet of you! I Thank you times two! Lol
N I'm happy u liked this work n appreciate you so much
my sweet friend :)
N I'm happy u liked this work n appreciate you so much
my sweet friend :)
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Anonymous
7th Aug 2013 1:10am
Best place for a fresh meal is the kitchen. Sexy, hot-off-the-griddle write, love.
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7th Aug 2013 5:45am
Wanna have breakfast with me? Lol
Thank you my lil sexy kitten, ur such a " purr-fect" steady supportive sweetie lol Appreciate u tons! :)
Thank you my lil sexy kitten, ur such a " purr-fect" steady supportive sweetie lol Appreciate u tons! :)
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7th Aug 2013 9:16pm
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7th Aug 2013 9:37pm
Thank you bro! Ur too kind but I'm happy for it lol
Appreciate u my friend :)
Appreciate u my friend :)
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