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'ILL INTENT'
~dedicated to the memory of Trayvon Martin,
n all the other 'Trayvons' out there~
The hand
of reprimand
should be grand
when it stands
for righting
what's wrong
it does NOT belong
connected
to an 'I am right' song
for whom shall ever
see him wrong
well...
'ill' placed bullets sprayed
on the ground red is layed
and they are gone
seen shadows arc
the law of land
so convoluted by man
they'll just keep
going afoul
until thou
sees thy Master
and he shall
deal his final Hand...
n all the other 'Trayvons' out there~
The hand
of reprimand
should be grand
when it stands
for righting
what's wrong
it does NOT belong
connected
to an 'I am right' song
for whom shall ever
see him wrong
well...
'ill' placed bullets sprayed
on the ground red is layed
and they are gone
seen shadows arc
the law of land
so convoluted by man
they'll just keep
going afoul
until thou
sees thy Master
and he shall
deal his final Hand...
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Re: 'ILL INTENT'
19th Jul 2013 12:07pm
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19th Jul 2013 12:14pm
Thank you, not too long I know but I was afraid I
would go on a very long rant! lol appreciate u dear :)
would go on a very long rant! lol appreciate u dear :)
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Anonymous
19th Jul 2013 12:25pm
Your poem is very well done in that it is not a rant but an observation that a life was taken and humans did not serve justice.
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the law of land
so convoluted by man
they'll just keep
going afoul
until thou
sees thy Master
and he shall
deal his final Hand...
________________________
However, Justice will be done for Trayvon by the people who are demanding a civil retrial, the perp will never live in peace on this earth again and in the end we all will be judged
by the True Judge.
Well done
Kitty
______________________
the law of land
so convoluted by man
they'll just keep
going afoul
until thou
sees thy Master
and he shall
deal his final Hand...
________________________
However, Justice will be done for Trayvon by the people who are demanding a civil retrial, the perp will never live in peace on this earth again and in the end we all will be judged
by the True Judge.
Well done
Kitty
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Re: 'ILL INTENT'
19th Jul 2013 12:29pm
Kitty, I adore you... You're so very serious
n deeply intellectual, spiritual too... N aside obviously from this piece... All I want now from you
Is feel ur laughter in the future, I know u got it in you lady!
lol thank you always my sweetheart :)
n deeply intellectual, spiritual too... N aside obviously from this piece... All I want now from you
Is feel ur laughter in the future, I know u got it in you lady!
lol thank you always my sweetheart :)
Re: 'ILL INTENT'
Anonymous
19th Jul 2013 2:20pm
Not familiar with the story hun...great tribute though :) x
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re: Re: 'ILL INTENT'
20th Jul 2013 3:29am
Being from so far away it's understandable but if u ever experienced ANY sort of prejudging of anyone or urself u can relate :) thank u my dear friend :)
Re: 'ILL INTENT'
19th Jul 2013 2:39pm
Too many of our babies are dieing at the hands of vigilantes taking the law into their own hands!Good one Poe!
Red
Red
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re: Re: 'ILL INTENT'
20th Jul 2013 11:48am
Ur so very right lady, too many for sure... smh
thank u my sweet lady, appreciate u much :)
thank u my sweet lady, appreciate u much :)
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19th Jul 2013 5:55pm
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20th Jul 2013 3:27am
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Anonymous
19th Jul 2013 6:02pm
This news story even made it up here on the west coast of Canada. When they showed the interviews with the jurors, I couldn't believe the ignorance and stupidity. That was a crime in itself.
Terrific poem, cher.
Terrific poem, cher.
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re: Re: 'ILL INTENT'
19th Jul 2013 11:06pm
Thank u babe... Yea no sign of any Intelligence
Whatsoever huh? Thank u my dear :)
Whatsoever huh? Thank u my dear :)
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Anonymous
19th Jul 2013 9:07pm
Excellent poem/tribute, Poetikmind. Very well written! :)
*Peace* Carlene
*Peace* Carlene
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20th Jul 2013 2:21am
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19th Jul 2013 11:26pm
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20th Jul 2013 11:49am
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Anonymous
20th Jul 2013 2:51am
Judgement day shall come to all who play god with law. Very well done!!
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re: Re: 'ILL INTENT'
20th Jul 2013 11:51am
Yes I hear you my sweetness, let's hope some way some how
the future gets a lil better, though it doesn't look so good... Thank you my sweetness :)
the future gets a lil better, though it doesn't look so good... Thank you my sweetness :)
Re: 'ILL INTENT'
20th Jul 2013 2:55am
Great Tribute luv! Thank you for posting this! Does my heart good to see wonderful poets pay homage to Trayon! Xo
Pen Kiss~
Pen Kiss~
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re: Re: 'ILL INTENT'
20th Jul 2013 11:58am
No sweetheart thank you! you wonderful beautiful lady, I appreciate you greatly! :)