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Love, as clear as Day with Closed Eyes
There she is, more lovelier than I imagined
she need not rush to me
afraid... I am barely able to stand
my lord what did I do, to be rewarded this?
A beautiful creature
who now stands near
she somehow managed
to put my nervous heart at ease
placing a delicate kiss upon my lips
as I prayed she would...
The moment she was close enough
Oh my stars... die now, I could
because it feels as though I'm viewing an angel
sent from the heavens in the sky above
I reach for her hand
a bit more confident than before
then gently I push aside her hair...what exquiste eyes
she has, I'm lost...
She looks into my soul
I quickly lose control I need to taste her lips
So I kiss her deeply, pull her closer, our embrace releases...
A kinetic energy into the atmosphere
my world spins
I'm flying high, delirious...
love's injection I've been given, and finally I feel alive!
she need not rush to me
afraid... I am barely able to stand
my lord what did I do, to be rewarded this?
A beautiful creature
who now stands near
she somehow managed
to put my nervous heart at ease
placing a delicate kiss upon my lips
as I prayed she would...
The moment she was close enough
Oh my stars... die now, I could
because it feels as though I'm viewing an angel
sent from the heavens in the sky above
I reach for her hand
a bit more confident than before
then gently I push aside her hair...what exquiste eyes
she has, I'm lost...
She looks into my soul
I quickly lose control I need to taste her lips
So I kiss her deeply, pull her closer, our embrace releases...
A kinetic energy into the atmosphere
my world spins
I'm flying high, delirious...
love's injection I've been given, and finally I feel alive!
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Re: Love, as clear as Day with Closed Eyes
15th Jul 2013 12:48pm
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15th Jul 2013 2:29pm
Aaaawww thank u my dear, love to hear ur sweet thoughts on my ink :) n grateful I am always!
Re: Love, as clear as Day with Closed Eyes
15th Jul 2013 1:20pm
Oh myyyy how sweet and romantic, Peo, I wonder who inspired such piece? Hmmm??? Lol beautiful! :-)
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re: Re: Love, as clear as Day with Closed Eyes
15th Jul 2013 2:31pm
I could tell u, but then I'd have to kill you lol
Jk! just me being my usual 'dreamy' silly self
:) thank u my wonderful sweetness :)
Jk! just me being my usual 'dreamy' silly self
:) thank u my wonderful sweetness :)
Re: Love, as clear as Day with Closed Eyes
Anonymous
15th Jul 2013 3:49pm
Love these lines:A kinetic energy into the atmosphere
my world spins
I'm flying high, delirious...
love's injection I've been given, and finally I feel alive!
So romantic, and captivating:)
my world spins
I'm flying high, delirious...
love's injection I've been given, and finally I feel alive!
So romantic, and captivating:)
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re: Re: Love, as clear as Day with Closed Eyes
15th Jul 2013 7:32pm
Sweetie it's ladies like u who inspire me each day
n one ant help it but to be drawn to romantic thoughts when reading amazing inks like urs :) thank u! :)
n one ant help it but to be drawn to romantic thoughts when reading amazing inks like urs :) thank u! :)
Re: Love, as clear as Day with Closed Eyes
Anonymous
15th Jul 2013 5:03pm
wonderfully romantic...love it :) x
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re: Re: Love, as clear as Day with Closed Eyes
15th Jul 2013 7:34pm
Thank u precious... Happy u think so n as I stated above, inks likes Inspires me to do what I do... N your support as well lol
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Anonymous
15th Jul 2013 9:18pm
This is a beautiful, sweet poem, cher. Lucky the lady that can inspire you to such flights.
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re: Re: Love, as clear as Day with Closed Eyes
16th Jul 2013 00:28am
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Anonymous
16th Jul 2013 8:54pm
Love injection sounds like just what I need. :)
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re: Re: Love, as clear as Day with Closed Eyes
17th Jul 2013 00:58am
Lol yea problem is though, once injected the side effects kick in too... Worry, pain, anger, disinterest etc... Lol
Oh my bad, was I being a joy kill? lol
Thank u :)
Oh my bad, was I being a joy kill? lol
Thank u :)
Re: Love, as clear as Day with Closed Eyes
17th Jul 2013 12:31pm
Beautifully written and so heartfelt, Poetikmind! I can see your soul glow!
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re: Re: Love, as clear as Day with Closed Eyes
17th Jul 2013 1:31pm
aaaawww my precious lady! Ur so wonderful! thank u sooooo much u made my day start with a big smile :)