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Sigh
A delicate breeze
my face caressed
toes in the sand
walking along the shore
collecting sea shells
my hurt long gone
feelings swirl
as the sea mist
kisses me gently
in love with the ocean
being a sacred realm
daughter of water
now sprinkled in light
the clouds have parted
darkness shadows me no more
feeling free and alive
I take a deep breath
and sigh in relief
depression behind me
the sea my home
a balm for my soul
my face caressed
toes in the sand
walking along the shore
collecting sea shells
my hurt long gone
feelings swirl
as the sea mist
kisses me gently
in love with the ocean
being a sacred realm
daughter of water
now sprinkled in light
the clouds have parted
darkness shadows me no more
feeling free and alive
I take a deep breath
and sigh in relief
depression behind me
the sea my home
a balm for my soul
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Anonymous
11th Jul 2013 6:58pm
Beautiful soothing write crim...just lovely.
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Anonymous
11th Jul 2013 7:22pm
This is such a calming lovely poem
Thank you for a good read
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Kitty
Thank you for a good read
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Kitty
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Re: Sigh
11th Jul 2013 7:45pm
Leave it to a junkie to think this was about shooting smack. Nice write.
Gemini
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11th Jul 2013 8:36pm
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Anonymous
11th Jul 2013 8:37pm
Very beauty, elegant, a calm it
feels and soothes.
Fave lines: feelings swirl
as the sea mist
kisses me gently
in love with the ocean
being a sacred realm
daughter of water
now sprinkled in light
a balm for my soul
A great description of the
ocean, and has a mystical, earthy
feel....nice job:)
feels and soothes.
Fave lines: feelings swirl
as the sea mist
kisses me gently
in love with the ocean
being a sacred realm
daughter of water
now sprinkled in light
a balm for my soul
A great description of the
ocean, and has a mystical, earthy
feel....nice job:)
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Re: Sigh
11th Jul 2013 8:58pm
This is sooo pretty Crim from the words to the image light and airy very nice!
Red
Red
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Anonymous
12th Jul 2013 7:21pm
This is so tranquil, I am drawn in by the words and the vision you bring to life is so real that I almost see the reflections of clouds drifting over the water. Really loved this write, Crimsin!
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12th Jul 2013 8:50pm
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Anonymous
16th Aug 2013 5:22am
Beautiful piece! Great imagery that floats you thru this. :)
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