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all aboard

I don't know why.......

but for me
  it`s a train

  I don't have true
suicidal tendencies
shrinks refer to my
fleeting daydreams
as passing ideation

my inner-vision
detects darkness
gags from oxygen poor air
shakes from rumbling concrete

this cavern
financed with pork-bellies
and blue collar cadavers
is my chosen
Kodak moment
my free-will controlled
location and mode
of intentional
terrestrial demise

in other words...

I picture myself
timing it right
successfully leaping
in the path
of a roaring
subway train

perhaps
  when I imagine
actually feeling
the micro-second of
bone crushing,
organ splattering
collision
  it's my body's own defense
squashing me back down
  into submission
under the eternal
  un-lubricated ass-fuck
of temporal livin'

all aboard

Written by drivelicious13

(alon aLion)

Published 10th Jul 2013

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Re: all aboard

blocat

10th Jul 2013 10:21am

Dark thoughts we all have from time to time. Thank god we don't all act on them or the place would be brought to a full stop!
Good poem thought provoking for sure!

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Re: all aboard

Grace (IDryad)

10th Jul 2013 2:21pm

Life indeed is a ride. sometimes it stops midway and you get out...at times the train squash you and at times it passes by benevolently. good read, D.