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U R You-niquely U
You picked up the pen...and there you
Decided that you and only you would
Tell the tale of you...
Yes....you have read books...
Many many books...
But you knew then....
Knew how to read books
What they were intended for...originally
Inspiration...
They were never meant to serve as blueprints
To be followed to a T...
Unthinkingly
Copied to..perfection...
Plagiarized...
No...
That would be the same as copying
Someone's Soul..
In a manner of speaking...
You instead chose to express the
Uninhibited you
The mis-interpreted you
The unexpected creative you...
The never talked about to your family you
You said...FUCK THAT...
FUCK THIS SHIT!
Enough of listening to people ramble on
About things they KNEW they were smart about
Time to do you
The you-nique u
And that's where your pen transforms..
Becoming...
You sword in which you use to battle your own demons
Your spaceship where you travel to places beyond your sight
Your mega-phone speaking for those who have no voice
Your drug in which you inject yourself with never
Before felt sensations of euphoria...
Your preacher blessin you with sermons designed
Especially for you and you alone
Your sado-masochist dripping ink-stains of forbidden pleasure
Your judge jury and executioner convicting you as
No one else can..
Or has the right to do...
Your pen in effect has become an extension of
Your free will
To do with as you please...
So please..
Never let another taint your pen
For it is your last vestige of freedom
The only place left where you can express
The you-niquely gifted you...
PEACE....
Decided that you and only you would
Tell the tale of you...
Yes....you have read books...
Many many books...
But you knew then....
Knew how to read books
What they were intended for...originally
Inspiration...
They were never meant to serve as blueprints
To be followed to a T...
Unthinkingly
Copied to..perfection...
Plagiarized...
No...
That would be the same as copying
Someone's Soul..
In a manner of speaking...
You instead chose to express the
Uninhibited you
The mis-interpreted you
The unexpected creative you...
The never talked about to your family you
You said...FUCK THAT...
FUCK THIS SHIT!
Enough of listening to people ramble on
About things they KNEW they were smart about
Time to do you
The you-nique u
And that's where your pen transforms..
Becoming...
You sword in which you use to battle your own demons
Your spaceship where you travel to places beyond your sight
Your mega-phone speaking for those who have no voice
Your drug in which you inject yourself with never
Before felt sensations of euphoria...
Your preacher blessin you with sermons designed
Especially for you and you alone
Your sado-masochist dripping ink-stains of forbidden pleasure
Your judge jury and executioner convicting you as
No one else can..
Or has the right to do...
Your pen in effect has become an extension of
Your free will
To do with as you please...
So please..
Never let another taint your pen
For it is your last vestige of freedom
The only place left where you can express
The you-niquely gifted you...
PEACE....
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re: Re: U R You-niquely U
4th Jul 2013 10:04pm
Re: U R You-niquely U
Anonymous
5th Jul 2013 00:02am
Damn Naajir, have you been hanging out in my head? :) You have described me to a T with this passage:
"You instead chose to express the
Uninhibited you
The mis-interpreted you
The unexpected creative you...
The never talked about to your family you"
Dude this is a declaration of independence.
This passage, I'll have to admit, had me a little teary eyed:
"Your judge jury and executioner convicting you as
No one else can..
Or has the right to do... "
Thank you for putting in to words the way I feel :)
"You instead chose to express the
Uninhibited you
The mis-interpreted you
The unexpected creative you...
The never talked about to your family you"
Dude this is a declaration of independence.
This passage, I'll have to admit, had me a little teary eyed:
"Your judge jury and executioner convicting you as
No one else can..
Or has the right to do... "
Thank you for putting in to words the way I feel :)
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re: Re: U R You-niquely U
5th Jul 2013 3:30pm
I'm glad it moved you so deeply Frank and honored that you shared these thoughts..thank you bro.
Re: U R You-niquely U
5th Jul 2013 00:10am
re: Re: U R You-niquely U
5th Jul 2013 3:32pm
Re: U R You-niquely U
5th Jul 2013 2:23am
Oh Snap Bruh! Ok...This hit me like a ton of bricks in print & 3D...Coming write at whoever reads it...Amazing...I'm diggin' the back to the basics understanding
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re: Re: U R You-niquely U
5th Jul 2013 3:34pm
damn D..you always get at the heart of the matter..appreciate the profound word mos def!!!
Re: U R You-niquely U
5th Jul 2013 6:14am
Naajir This could very easily be talking about me, so much so I had to read it more than once. Amazing!
Red
Red
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re: Re: U R You-niquely U
5th Jul 2013 3:36pm
Re: U R You-niquely U
5th Jul 2013 7:57am
OMG! Your Pen is clearly on some new sh*t! haha Whew! Hell, I was about to copy my favorite lines until I realized it was the whole darn poem.
I swear when you come with a message, you bring the thunder! Love it! Xo
Oh and ditto what Red said!
I swear when you come with a message, you bring the thunder! Love it! Xo
Oh and ditto what Red said!
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re: Re: U R You-niquely U
5th Jul 2013 3:39pm
takin it back to the beginning before movin forward is all..a big thanks to ya Rain...you know the appreciation is endless..
Re: U R You-niquely U
5th Jul 2013 12:16pm
WOWZERS!!! once more the GENIUS OF YOU shines bro! this another, MASTER inking that i most def. have to fav! :) yup... deep n inspiring shizznit kid l.o.l.
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re: Re: U R You-niquely U
5th Jul 2013 3:44pm
thanks my brotha for the mountain-sized praise..humbled and honored no doubt...
Re: U R You-niquely U
5th Jul 2013 2:52pm
I'm at a loss for words but a whole new outlook on life
Thank you pen leader :)
Great write
Thank you pen leader :)
Great write
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re: Re: U R You-niquely U
wow!!! thank you Hotness for your humbling comments....i'm so glad it moved you so and deeply appreciative for sharing those thoughts...
Re: U R You-niquely U
14th Jul 2013 7:04am
The force is strong with you. May it continue.
Seeing as I'm reading your newer words first I already know it does :)
S
Seeing as I'm reading your newer words first I already know it does :)
S
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Re: U R You-niquely U
21st Jan 2016 7:57am
Re: U R You-niquely U
5th Jun 2015 11:19pm
This may be the story of many, and you captured it beautifully..curtsy bow...
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re: Re: U R You-niquely U
6th Jun 2015 5:52am
you're more than likely right..thank you very much for leaving your thoughts Feenix
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7th Jun 2015 5:31pm
Re. U R You-niquely U
19th Jan 2016 3:08am
Pen & I have been wrestling lately.... nothing seems good enough when surrounded by such talent. This piece is encouraging, thanks!
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Re: Re. U R You-niquely U
19th Jan 2016 3:46am
thank you for your words again...
just write for you and keep writing...
i felt the exact same way when i first started four years ago...I'm glad this piece encouraged you...
just write for you and keep writing...
i felt the exact same way when i first started four years ago...I'm glad this piece encouraged you...
Re. U R You-niquely U
15th Jan 2018 10:44am
Felt the message in this piece... enjoying your ink, can't wait until I get a sample of the next.
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Re: Re. U R You-niquely U
15th Jan 2018 9:33pm
Re. U R You-niquely U
5th May 2018 1:12am
Much wisdom and insight found in your write. I love the encouragement and inspiration of being one's self, excellent work. Respectfully,
Survivor
Survivor
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Re: Re. U R You-niquely U
22nd Dec 2023 7:51am
Thank you for dropping by
one of my earlier vibes. Survivor
I deeply appreciate it!!
one of my earlier vibes. Survivor
I deeply appreciate it!!
Re. U R You-niquely U
10th Oct 2024 9:15am
Superbly crafted Naaj, that's how I've always felt about pens, they are an extension of my hand haha 🙃❤️
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Re: Re. U R You-niquely U
10th Oct 2024 4:13pm
Thanks for dropping by Pete. This is one of my vibes I like to revisit
to keep me inspired. Glad you related.
to keep me inspired. Glad you related.